Douluo: I level up alone

Chapter 41 Summary at the end of the volume
Well, everyone's comments will be read when I have enough time.

Newcomers and new books, there are many deficiencies, and I hope everyone will forgive me.

There are indeed some problems in some places, and I am also thinking about how to correct them.

As for the areas that I personally think are okay, I reserve my opinion.

Seek common ground while reserving differences. After all, doujin is a derivative creation based on the original work, and there are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people in the original work. Naturally, different opinions will arise, and there is no way to satisfy everyone's ideas.

So, since I'm writing the book, let's follow my ideas.

Alright, now it's time for answers.

Generally speaking, the three areas are more controversial.

The first place is the sarcasm of the guard.

I have thought about it carefully. It is reasonable for the gate guard to look down on the first level of innate. The whole academy is a soul master. Half a level like Yu Xiaogang is a special case. The students in the city are not very talented, most of them should be level 1~10, and it is estimated that they are only level 1. Tang San Xiaowu's full soul power is a special case.

1~3, 1 is also the lowest level, plus the "Variation Martial Soul: Black Eye" written in the Martial Soul Appraisal, the Noumenon Martial Soul came out of the Noumenon Sect after 1 years and was known by others.

There is no precedent for the body mutated martial soul + the worst soul power. Ordinary people know that they can only be a ten-level soul master in a lifetime. If the mutation is a poor mutation, it is the same as Yu Xiaogang, stuck at level 9 and unable to move. Not impossible.

At least on the surface, he is much worse than other students in the academy.

Therefore, it's normal for the guards who see too much to look down on the protagonist. How can the guards of the unit see a big leader too much, how can they look down on a small staff member? (I think there is nothing wrong with this mental state. There are many people with higher hearts than paper and thinner nostrils. I can't make money, so it doesn't prevent me from despising the stupidity of a failed entrepreneur.)
Of course, using "whispering quietly" may be a bit over the top, a bit exaggerated, and can easily offend people.

I thought about it for a long time, and finally it is more appropriate to change it to "defamation".I didn't say it, but I didn't think much of it in my heart.Thinking about it, it shouldn't be a big problem.

Second, about Zhu Zhuqing's attention to the protagonist, and the issue of the martial soul fusion technique.

Before holding hands, Zhu Zhuqing paid attention to the protagonist, but in the end it was not the martial soul fusion skill, which some people thought was unreasonable.

In fact, I have thought about Zhu Zhuqing's character design. In a relatively depressing environment, he becomes lifeless and cold, and naturally he will not get close to others.

But it does not mean that they will be completely isolated from the outside world. This kind of person will constantly observe people on the side, like a bystander, watching others happy and sad indifferently, as if they are incompatible with everything around them.

This is my guess of Zhu Zhuqing's personality.

So Zhu Zhuqing's attention before "holding hands" was just watching a stranger.

But the protagonist told a lot of lies, for fear of being found out, hiding traitors in his heart, not frank, easy to doubt himself after being watched for a long time.

I want to write that the protagonist is similar to the mental state of the protagonist when Cao Cao asked Cao Pi to guard the spirit for Cao Chong.Because there is treachery hidden in her heart, the slightest look from others seems to mean stripping herself naked from head to toe.

Therefore, the protagonist "misunderstood" Zhu Zhuqing's eyes.

After holding hands, there is no need to explain, I wrote it in the text in the text.

This is Zhu Zhuqing's "misunderstanding" of the protagonist in turn.

These are my thoughts when writing. Maybe many people can't understand this feeling when they read the book. Maybe it's because my writing skills are limited and I can't describe this kind of plot in place.

I'm really ashamed, everyone forgive me.I am just a newcomer to writing novels, and I am less than many people.

Third, regarding the protagonist's fight against the Soul Emperor, the strength has improved too fast, and it is suspected that the combat power has collapsed.

There is controversy about the protagonist defeating the Soul Emperor and the Soul King.

First post a paragraph of the original text of Part 2: [Spirit beasts will have a qualitative leap when they reach ten thousand years. Generally speaking, if humans want to deal with ten thousand-year-level soul beasts alone, they need at least six-ring strength to be possible.To deal with soul beasts that are more than 3 years old, at least seven rings or above are required, and you can only try it after you have a martial soul. 】

I replied: [The Direclaw bear is equivalent to ten thousand years, and the shadow strength has been cut, but only a small part, as mentioned above.Because there is no fear of death, there will be a part of "madness" bonus.In addition, it can be resurrected continuously, and it can be used for attrition wars.

As for the soul power consumption of resurrection, I did write in the previous article that it cannot support too many resurrections, but after all, there is no written system, and there is no way to write the number of resurrections too specifically in data, and it is easy to appear in the original "hydrogen man" like the original book. A brainless bug.It can only be written by intuitive feeling.

1 false ten thousand years + 1 false 5k years + 13 3k years, with a limited number of resurrections, there is still a chance to kill a soul emperor. If you are fighting the king, no matter how strong you are at level 15, you can't beat the opponent without a break The resurrected five level 13 hero team battles aren't they? 】

Reader asked: [You are more gamified, and the battle is not like you punch me.

1. You yourself said that the benchmark is ten thousand years, not the real ten thousand years, and there has not been a qualitative change. There are still people who are not fools and will run away if they cannot be defeated.

2. You let the protagonist hide, it still makes sense, can a [-]th-level great soul master withstand a general attack from the soul emperor, this soul emperor still has several soul kings with him, at the moment of despair, Why don't you get some support?

3. You are straightforward. The protagonist is carried into the sky by a bird soul beast, and is surrounded by shadows. I can still accept it. What you wrote, those people are just like fools. The Sixth Ring of the Soul Emperor directly clears the place. Come on. A soul king can capture the protagonist. 】

1. It makes sense. I was negligent. The Direclaw Bear is just a benchmark for ten thousand years, not a real ten thousand years.Even if there is an immortal "mad transformation", it is still unknown whether he can be on par with the Soul Emperor.So mark it here and talk about it at the end.But if you can't defeat the opponent, he will run away. I don't agree with this.I haven't written it yet, but both of them think that there is a chance to drag the protagonist to death or directly rush in to kill the protagonist. They have a psychological advantage. If they don't have the advantage, of course they will run away, but what if the other party thinks they can kill the protagonist?Can you run?

2. I can't stop the attack of the soul emperor, but I didn't consider the general attack, only the soul skill.

From the very beginning, the two wanted to attack the protagonist directly, and released their soul skills, but the Dreadclaw Bear's defense was very strong, and it was appropriate to use him as a meat shield to protect the protagonist. If it was normal, they had to get close first.

But after getting close, he hit the protagonist's arms.

I still remember that when I was playing League of Legends, I met a male gunman for the first time. After being deprived of my vision, I panicked and used all my skills to output, but in the end I didn't hit anyone, and I was killed in the end.The unexpected feeling of panic is still fresh in my memory.

So the soul skill set is to deprive the vision by relying on the dark nature of the shadow when the ball shatters.

I personally think that deprivation of vision is a very bug skill.

My original intention is: the protagonist has always known that his second skill is buggy, so he intends to rely on the moment when the second soul skill is broken, to deprive him of vision, and to catch him by surprise.

I wrote about the surprise when the Soul Emperor broke the ball. The feeling of being deprived of vision in such joy, and the sense of gap, was a good opportunity.The Direclaw Bear took the opportunity to kill a blind man, not without this opportunity.

This kind of psychological game is actually difficult to explain. It is precisely because the Soul Emperor feels that he can beat him that he will not escape.And because the protagonist is weak, he can lure the enemy to attack, relying on the suddenness of his soul skills to seize the only opportunity to kill the enemy at the unexpected moment.

How could he self-destruct when he was killed by one blow?
Only the disadvantaged will blew themselves up in despair.How could the dominant person think of self-destruct?The dominant person has never considered this option, and did not allow him time to think, self-destruction does not exist.

On the contrary, if the protagonist has overwhelming power, he will blow himself up after a while, right?
3. Flying into the sky is unlikely.You also said that you questioned the number of resurrections. The shadow cannot be resurrected too many times. Relying on the soul beast is hard enough. If you drag it down, the soul power will be gone. The protagonist will lose.

The result of "the soul emperor clears the field, and the soul king arrests people" is essentially the same. Grabbing people at close range will deprive them of vision, and the soul king may be killed by surprise.

Of course, when dealing with the Soul Emperor later, the protagonist will be in trouble. Without the effect of surprise, the protagonist might also lose, there is no doubt about it.

But then again, the fight between the two sides is to predict the enemy first, find the opportunity, and make choices in an instant.

Of course the Soul Emperor Soul King has countless ways to kill the protagonist!The protagonist also has countless choices to lose his own advantages, such as flying to the sky mentioned above, without enough soul power to support.

The protagonist is naturally not without opportunities. When the weak face the strong, they can only rely on "surprise" and "opponent's mistakes". Seizing these two points and not letting go of an opportunity, is it true that there is no chance of winning at all?
In the battle of life and death, if there is insufficient information, others may set a trap, if you hesitate for a moment, you may have no chance to make a choice, and if you make a mistake, you may die.

The protagonist has an intelligence advantage (soul skill bug), and what he is waiting for is the moment of hesitation when the opponent has no vision. This is the opponent's mistake, and if he catches it, he can turn defeat into victory.

Emmm, Soul Emperor Soul King is indeed not a fool.But you can’t write a book about every situation, right?Do we need to add a narration, if the soul emperor and the soul king did something at a certain moment, the result would be very different, the protagonist would definitely be killed by him, blah blah blah.

Writing a book must let the protagonist win, otherwise how can you call it the protagonist?There are thousands of possibilities for fighting, but I can't choose the one that is most unfavorable to the protagonist to write, right?How unlucky is it for the protagonist to always have no chance?If you want to write an enemy that is extremely difficult, and the protagonist is frustrated frequently, then I am afraid that readers will not like to read it, it is too cruel to the protagonist.

Unless the protagonist is much stronger than the enemy, there is no need to play tricks at all, just crush them all the way.

But crushing creates a consequence. Going back to point 1, the opponent can't beat him, he will run away, and if he can't run away, he will explode himself.

How to deal with it?

There are thousands of possibilities and it is impossible to cover everything.

Going back to the mark at point 1, the soul emperor's strength is too high, and the direclaw bear is not really ten thousand years old, whether it can resist it.I have considered changing the soul emperor to the soul king, but I still hesitate, because after the change, can they have the psychological advantage of killing the protagonist?Give me some time, I'll think about whether to change or not.

Above, the explanation ends here.

My broken thoughts:
My ability is limited, and my writing may not be very good. I am doing my best, and I hope everyone will understand.

Writing a fanfic is a thankless task. I used to think that writing a fanfic would be easier by following the timeline and outline of the original work, and I could practice my writing.

Only after writing did I realize that writing fan fiction is difficult, even more difficult than original writing.

Because the creation is based on the original work, the original work has already been set, and many people have different opinions, so there are many different criticisms and suggestions for fan works.

It is not easy to accommodate all opinions.

If it is original, there won't be so many problems, and all interpretation rights belong to the author.

I am greedy for fan traffic, and I want to have the freedom of originality and the right to interpret.Difficult...

good night, everyone.

Next volume: See the Dragon in the Field.

See you in Heaven Dou City.

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