I can talk to my internal organs

Final Thoughts 2.0
  Finished, finished.

Originally I thought I could write [-] million words.

But I overestimated myself.

This kind of realistic subject matter, especially, requires professional professional writing.

It’s really difficult to write.

It also exposed many of my shortcomings.

For example, if you output too many personal opinions, you will bring your own emotions into it as you write.

But for a reader, reading a novel is not about reading the author's emotions, but reading a wonderful story.

A story can be called a good story if it can arouse the reader's emotions, rather than simply relying on the author's emotional output to drive the reader.

This approach is very low-level and somewhat deliberate.

There is actually no essential difference from the kind of "family members, who knows" on the Internet.

Since I came into contact with Chinese medicine, I have indeed been extremely disgusted with Western medicine for a period of time.

Even if I try my best to be objective enough, my dissatisfaction with Western medicine will still be revealed between the lines.

I admit this is my fault.

But to be honest, it is really difficult for people to remain objective enough.

The so-called objectivity means that my point of view is consistent with yours, so you will think that I am objective. When we are inconsistent, my point of view becomes subjective.

I will correct this way of directly outputting emotions in the next book.

Another shortcoming is that the story is not strong.

It didn't take me long to conceive of this novel, just over an hour, just like writing this novel.

Just open word and do it.

That's why the settings of Goldfinger are so hasty.

Everyone who has finished reading it should be very clear that I basically stopped writing the system in the later stage, and I didn’t even write much dialogue about the five internal organs.

It’s not that I don’t want to write it, it’s that there was a flaw in my original design of the system and I couldn’t write it.

The dialogue about the five internal organs must rely on some relatively complex diseases, otherwise it will be repetitive when written.

Because most diseases are caused by the five of them, it won’t be interesting to write about them later.

Pure water word count.

It was also in the process of writing that I discovered that Chinese medicine talks to the five internal organs. Although this idea is relatively consistent, it has a fatal flaw.

Every time you change patients, you have to start the communication all over again.

There will be a sense of fragmentation in shaping the characteristics of the five internal organs.

Even if I specifically set characters and specific languages ​​for the five internal organs, this feeling of separation still exists. I don’t know if everyone will feel this way.

I personally don’t like writing outlines. Before writing a book, I always think about the beginning and the end, set up several major events in the middle, and roughly describe the direction of the protagonist.

Then I write and conceive at the same time.

When writing about traditional Chinese medicine, I basically use treatment to advance the plot. I also try to write group portraits and bring in the stories of patients.

But then I got sidetracked and was in too much of a hurry.

It did not make good use of the story to create characters, but instead took the path of changing the pattern of traditional Chinese medicine.

The direction must not be wrong, but it is too fast.

This can be regarded as a disadvantage of not writing an outline, and the opening of the book is too sloppy.

By the way, I probably won’t touch the system again in the future.

Because I really can’t write.

The reason why I have to add it is because I don’t have enough writing skills, so I can only use the system to add some fun and a sense of upgrade, and reduce the difficulty of writing.

The final score of this book is [-] subscriptions. As a traditional Chinese medicine book with an initial subscription of [-], I am very satisfied with this score. There are regrets, but most of them are satisfying.

Because I have already said everything I wanted to say.

I hope that everyone can go to bed early and get up early in the future, pay attention to diet and mood, learn some self-help health methods before getting sick, and don’t be afraid if you get sick. At the same time, whether it is traditional Chinese medicine or Western medicine, they are not as powerful as we think, because Any medicine relies on people. If people are not good enough, no matter how good the medicine is, it will be useless. Therefore, it is better to ask for help from others than to ask for help from yourself. Maintaining a good living habit is saving yourself.

Lujiu Traditional Chinese Medicine Hospital is just a creation of my own. It belongs to my dream of traditional Chinese medicine. I don’t know if everyone is satisfied with it.

I hope there is a hospital like Lujiu Traditional Chinese Medicine Hospital.

It puts people first, regards life as priceless, returns medical care to its original intention, and truly helps the world.

The above is the final review of the book "I Can Talk to the Five Internal Organs".

Below is the content of my new book.

The new book follows the idea of ​​​​dialogue with the five internal organs.

But there is no system.

The theme of this new book is immortality, and Golden Finger is the protagonist talking about his own five internal organs.

During the conversation, Wu Zang teaches the protagonist step by step how to live forever.

It will involve a lot of knowledge about traditional Chinese medicine. Readers who have read it can review it. Those who have not read it can learn it again. There is no harm in it.

Since the theme is immortality, the background must be fantasy.

In fact, at the beginning, I also wanted to talk about urban immortality, abandoning other elements, just like the style where I had no intention of becoming an immortal. Combined with my own theme, I described the protagonist pursuing the road to immortality like an ascetic monk.

But it's a pity that I'm not good enough to write such delicate words and gripping stories, and to create a memorable character in just a few words.

After weighing it again and again, I finally chose to go with the crowd.

The background of the story is also very simple. After science and technology developed, gene editing technology made a breakthrough, and humans discovered the mysterious "source essence". After making it into a gene potion, humans can awaken the power of the elements. People call it arcana. .

People with arcane abilities have transcended the category of human beings, but because they need to take drugs, and not everyone can successfully awaken, they are spurned by people who practice physical arts. However, with the continuous development of arcane arts, the strong ones are getting better and better. As time went by, physical skills gradually declined, so arcane arts and physical skills started a competition that lasted for hundreds of years, and arcane arts finally won.

The protagonist, Zou Yi, unexpectedly acquired the ability to communicate with the five internal organs after failing to achieve gene fusion after being admitted to Yehuo University. With the help of the five internal organs, he began to embark on the original path of physical skills, immortality.

This is a general content. Since Golden Finger communicates with the five internal organs, my discussion on the subject of immortality may be different from many immortality articles.

Because based on this golden finger, it is inevitable to avoid the Yellow Emperor's Internal Classic, and the increase of life span mentioned in the Yellow Emperor's Internal Classic is not contrary to nature.

The whole article talks about the diseases that people will get if they go against nature. If you go against nature and haven't cultivated to a certain level, you may die of the disease directly.

Therefore, true immortality should be achieved by following nature.

But the ultimate result of going with the will of heaven is definitely death, which is also the law of heaven.

Therefore, after determining this path, I will address the final topic of death, at least in a logical and self-consistent manner.

The theme this time allows me to have unlimited imagination, the plot is no longer constrained, and I find it interesting to write.

But this time is also a new challenge for me.

Because I haven’t written much about fighting, and what I’m best at is daily writing, and I haven’t written about particularly intense conflicts.

The battle between arcane arts and physical arts is actually based on Chen Dongda's The Other Side of Deep Space, but if I want to write it to Chen Dongda's level, I ask myself that I can't do it.

After all, I have also passed the stage of being a newbie, where I can kill five whites instantly as soon as I start writing.

Therefore, I only pursue one point in my new book: the writing should be smooth and try not to have too many poisonous points.

This is also the basic skill of many great masters.

I am currently studying as well.

As for that kind of explosive scene, I will do what I can.

As for the publishing time, it will definitely be published before the end of the month. I am currently saving the manuscript and asking the editor to help review it. I hope this book will not disappoint everyone.

Finally, there is the issue of updates. This Chinese medicine book is very slow to update, so I have always been self-aware and never asked for rewards or monthly tickets. I would like to express my gratitude again to the leader of this book, Tuo Jue, as well as many readers for their subscriptions and rewards. and monthly tickets, I really appreciate everyone’s continued support.

Finally, I hope everyone is in good health!

(End of this chapter)