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Chapter 128 Too Frontier for Humans

Yang Ruoqian drove home after a busy day at work.

He reached an agreement with the online novel platform before he got off work, and after some hard bargaining, he finally persuaded the platform to sell the copyright of this garbage novel to Kuiguang Company at a price of 200% of the standard edition fee.

"Are you back?" Chang Zhiqing, who was wearing a loose nightgown, opened the door for Yang Ruoqian, touched Yang Ruoqian's lips on tiptoe, "How is work today?"

After that night, Chang Zhiqing packed her personal belongings and moved into Yang Ruoqian's house thoroughly.

And it's a matter of course that I don't have to pay rent anymore...

In this way, Yang Ruoqian's monthly guaranteed income plummeted from 3500 yuan to 2000 yuan.

But after Chang Zhiqing moved out, the room next door was completely vacant, and the conditions for recruiting roommates could be lowered accordingly.

After all, Chang Zhiqing had too high demands on her roommates, so even though she had been hanging on the renting software for the past few months, no one came to rent the house.

As long as there are new tenants and the rent is 1500 per person, Yang Ruoqian's guaranteed minimum income can reach an astonishing 5000 yuan per month.

Yang Ruoqian touched his lips and coughed lightly: "It's okay, I talked to another company about a web drama project, it's very important."

To be honest, Yang Ruoqian was somewhat uncomfortable with the sudden change of their identities from college classmates to good friends to company subordinates to couples.

But Chang Zhiqing can do these actions naturally...

"The cost of filming a drama is not low, so be careful." Chang Zhiqing reminded, "And the script must be chosen well, and it must not ruin the reputation of our actors."

Although she is at home during the holidays, Chang Zhiqing will not lose this basic common sense.

"The most important thing is that I'm running out of time. I have to change the script tonight." Yang Ruoqian sat on the sofa and sighed, "I found a suitable novel, but some details still need to be revised."

"Tonight? So urgent?" Chang Zhiqing suddenly became unhappy, "And the screenwriter shouldn't be the job of the producer, why should we do it?"

Yang Ruoqian explained: "I asked for it on my own initiative. After all, that company is also new to the industry. I don't feel at ease in entrusting our actors to them."

After all, Cheng Fei said that she has a very strong screenwriting team. If she follows her plan completely, the money will not be lost...

"Then you should pay attention to rest. Don't let employees work overtime, and work hard on yourself, it's really..."

That's because employees working overtime are beneficial to the company...

The purpose of my overtime work is to create more loss-making projects for the company...

Yang Ruoqian slandered, then waved his hands: "Don't worry."

"Wash your hands and get ready to eat." Chang Zhiqing didn't bother to take care of her, and went into the kitchen to serve the dishes after she finished her instruction.

……

After eating and relaxing a bit, Yang Ruoqian took out the computer and put it on the table, intending to modify some details of this online novel.

The writing style of this online novel is extremely poor, the narrative is chaotic, the rhythm is fragmented, and it is full of a lot of rough, childish and embarrassing plots, lacking a sense of substitution, and it is extremely difficult to enjoy.

However, it is not enough to be extremely difficult to be cool. After all, the basic framework of the story is still there, and the overall style is still cool. If it is made into a web drama, maybe some people will like to watch it.

The quality of this novel is incomparable to the current trendy high-quality new media novels, but it is enough to show that there is a market for such writing, but the author did not write it well.

Yang Ruoqian intends to make some changes in some details, and change all the only plots in the novel that can arouse the audience's emotions.

Then add all the poisonous points that can touch the sensitive nerves of the audience.

First of all, the male protagonist has to be portrayed as a waste who completely relies on gold fingers, behaves brainlessly, speaks without childishness, is furious and shocked when the fart is big, but swallows his anger when encountering big things...

Bully the soft and fear the hard!

Secondly, create a dog-licking image for the protagonist, obviously the so-called "National Protector God of War", "Invincible Dragon King", punching a foreign army outside, but rushing to be someone else's son-in-law, for those who cuckold themselves But the fiancée has repeatedly tolerated it, and even obeyed her words.

Finally, some common sense points were changed to be unreasonable. For example, the male protagonist is obviously the "Dragon King of War God", but no one recognizes his identity, and countless cannon fodder will always send people to kidnap the male protagonist's family.

Highlight a concept that the audience is not finished if you don't rush to death.

For special effects, use them in useless places as much as possible, such as the "big scene" where dozens of helicopters roar past the rooftops at every turn, and the "shocking plot" where dozens of black luxury cars drive towards you at every turn.

In short, the special effects must be moistened and burned silently, to the most useless place.

Otherwise, it is likely to attract the kind of audience who don't care about the plot at all, don't pay attention to the characters at all, and just watch the special effects.

The special effects of web dramas are not very good, plus this messy stewed theme of aliens, supernatural powers, martial arts, fairy tales, and military that happened in the modern city and a story full of poisonous points...

Yang Ruoqian, who has read a lot of online novels and watched a lot of TV dramas, has already started to feel sick.

Web scripts with this kind of theme don't please female audiences, and now if they offend the poor male audience together, are they afraid they won't be able to pounce?

With the ready-made script in hand, Yang Ruoqian quickly typed up the words...

Busy until three o'clock in the morning, after rewriting and compressing a novel with hundreds of thousands of words into a plot of 10,000+ words, Yang Ruoqian let out a long breath.

"finished!"

"Codewriting is really difficult... Well, I can still sleep for five or six hours. I don't need to ask for leave tomorrow, and I can go to work normally!"

After sighing, Yang Ruoqian threw the document to Lin Cao, took a shower, and went back to his room to go to bed.

He had just sat on the bed, before he had time to lie down, a pair of white and slender jade arms suddenly stretched out from under the quilt, wrapped around Yang Ruoqian's neck, and dragged him into his arms.

Anger and resentment coexisted in Chang Zhiqing's voice, obviously she had waited for a long, long time: "You are finally done, huh?! Busy person?"

……

the next morning.

Lin Cao sat at his desk, watching Mr. Yang send him the script.

In the first few days, because there were many "old friends" in the company, Lin Cao was always asked questions, which was quite embarrassing.

But after being baptized by the company's strict relaxation rules, relaxing his body in the massage room, and conquering his appetite in the staff canteen, Lin Cao soon integrated into Kuiguang Company and couldn't extricate himself.

"Have you heard that the new operation brother is idle at home and has nothing to do. Mr. Yang found out about his secret work and deducted 200 yuan from his salary. The thief is scary."

"Scary, how did Mr. Yang find out?"

"Because the work progress when I left work the previous day was different from the work progress when I went to work the next day..."

"Fortunately, Mr. Yang asked for leave today."

"It's another day when the two leaders are away. It's great. I can work overtime during the break."

Lin Cao lowered his head a little guilty.

He had nothing to do yesterday, so he took a peek at the resumes of the actors who were interested in this web drama. As he expected, most of them were small group performers who were on set.

Even if there is a professional actor once in a while, he is completely unknown, can't get a role, and can't even be considered an eighteenth-line actor.

Out of breath, at least once a little "popular".

After all, big-name actors and traffic stars have their own channels and their own brokerage companies, so they don't need to negotiate cooperation through social recruitment.

As for Mr. Yang taking him out to talk about cooperation, what did he learn...

It can only be said that he has learned everything except nothing.

He deserves to be a boss who can repeatedly entrap himself and turn defeat into victory.

When he was an opponent before, he realized the deep and long-term concealed layout ability of President Yang's city mansion through repeated failures.

Only after becoming his subordinate did he realize that what happened before was just the tip of the iceberg.

Otherwise, with so many years of work experience, why can't I even understand Mr. Yang's words?
"Let's read the script first."

Sometimes an actor doesn't have to be good at acting, he has to be suitable.

Letting an actor with very good acting skills play a role that is not suitable for him will probably result in twice the result with half the effort. A lot of salary will be spent, but the audience will not buy it at all.

On the contrary, if a once-unknown actor is allowed to play a suitable role, the effect is very likely to spend a small amount of money to accomplish big things, and it is even not impossible to directly make this actor famous!

As for how to judge whether an actor is suitable, it is up to Lin Cao, the agent, to make decisions based on the script.

"Mr. Yang entrusted such an important task to me alone. Presumably he recognizes my ability very much, and he must give him a satisfactory answer."

Lin Cao opened the document that Yang Ruoqian sent him in the middle of the night with an extremely solemn and sacred heart.

This small document is related to the life and death of a tens of millions project, and also related to Lin Cao's future.

Word loaded quickly.

A row of book titles appeared directly in front of Lin Cao.

"The Son-in-Law of Protecting the Nation: I Return with a Troop of 1000 Million Troops and Fulfill the 10-Year Agreement"

"Ten years expire!"

"Ten years ago, I fend for myself like a wild dog on the street. Ten years later, I, the Dragon King, returned... Is she okay?"

"It's time to collect debts!"

Lin Cao looked at the title of the book and the first three lines, and suddenly felt thunder rolling.

This script...

It's so poisonous!

In just two sentences, a good-for-nothing protagonist can be clearly portrayed!

It has to be said that people who can write this kind of plot also have a certain level of talent.

Lin Cao suppressed his shock and continued to look down.

The story takes place in the "Dragon Kingdom" in the urban setting, where many foreign races are coveting and want to invade at any time.Fortunately, the so-called "Four War Gods" and the mysterious "Peerless Dragon King" defended their home and country, so they survived.

And this so-called "Peerless Dragon King" is naturally the hero of this play.

The male protagonist is not only the invincible "Peerless Dragon King", but also the legendary God of Medicine who has mastered the "Taiyi Magic Needle".

As for why the leading actor has to hide his name even when he is already invincible, even Yang Ruoqian, the screenwriter, doesn’t know.

Ten years ago, the male protagonist was slandered as a spy of a foreign race, his martial arts were abolished, his dantian was shattered, and he was kicked out of the house. Even his engaged fiancée ran away with his enemy regardless of the engagement.

Due to various reasons, the male protagonist became the son-in-law of a certain big family. He was looked down upon all day long, and his wife hooked up with others, even unwilling to look straight at the male protagonist.

While looking at the script in shock, Lin Cao complained, "Good guy, forget about getting green, and get green twice..."

It's really not counting crazy dancing on the minefield of the audience, but also pissing...

No, the script Mr. Yang personally selected must have a deep meaning, and it must not be as simple as it seems on the surface.

Perhaps, Yang always wanted to create a true work of art that combines online literature, traditional TV dramas and online dramas.

Behind these seemingly absurd stories, perhaps every word and every punctuation mark has profound educational significance.

After changing his mentality, the shocked expression on Lin Cao's face disappeared.

The script must be a good script, it's just that I didn't understand it.

So Lin Cao continued to look down...

After becoming the son-in-law, the male protagonist was driven to the battlefield of foreign races. By chance, he got the "Taiyi Magic Needle" and used acupuncture to cure leukemia in the daughter of a certain important man. .

Ten years later, the male protagonist heard that his ex-fiancée had leukemia, so he returned to the family that abandoned him, and planned to use his own acupuncture to cure his ex-fiancée's leukemia.

As a result, as soon as he entered the door, he was unanimously humiliated by all members of the family. The male protagonist silently endured all the abuse, refused his subordinates' plan to reveal his identity, and cured leukemia under the watchful eyes of his ex-fiancee and current boyfriend.

The subordinates asked the hero why he took action to treat the illness, and he said that it was a relative after all.

Very coquettish and filial piety.

After leaving the family amid humiliation and ridicule, the male protagonist returned to his natal family as his son-in-law, only to find out that his current fiancée also had leukemia, and was hooking up with the second male villain.

The almost identical scenario happened again, and everyone in the natal family sneered at the son-in-law, saying that they spent 500 million yuan to hire a certain doctor to treat the illness, and that the male lead was a bluffing liar.

At the same time, the genius doctor arrived and confidently treated the male lead's fiancée, but not only did the fiancée's leukemia not recover, but she vomited three liters of blood, which was in danger.

The male protagonist wanted to make a move, and was scolded again, but before the cursing was over, a group of vicious people suddenly broke in at the door of the house. The female protagonist brought 300 billion dollars in cash, and begged the male protagonist to cure her father. leukemia……

Under the shock of everyone and the unwilling roar of his fiancée, the male protagonist finally completed the first pretentious plot after being aggrieved for so long.

However, this side has not finished pretending, and suddenly a subordinate came to report in a hurry, saying that the hero's mother was kidnapped, because someone needed it to cure the leukemia of the old lady in the family.

For the sake of his mother, the male protagonist can only abandon the heroine halfway in a very bloody way, and go to save his mother alone, but the bloody discovery is that the person who kidnapped his mother is actually his ex-fiancee.

So after all kinds of soft hands and all kinds of psychological struggles, the hero was forced to destroy his family, but let go of his ex-fiancee.

……

……

After going through a bloody plot of 10,000+ words, because the script collapsed so badly, in the end, the male protagonist directly wiped out all the enemies with one hand, and the beauty returned.

Lin Cao, who saw the ending, fell into a deep sluggishness.

Since you can kill all the enemies with one hand, why did you pull those 10,000+ words before?

"There must be something profound!"

(End of this chapter)