The days when I retired with the queen of music

Chapter 248
Lu Anzhi's cell phone is not hands-free.However, the mobile phone he took from Kyushu Teleport to charge the phone bill has always had a problem, that is, the sound of the receiver is a bit loud.

So even if he didn't turn on the speakerphone, the other three people in the family could hear what Gu Ruiyong said in the receiver.

They all looked at Lu Anzhi for a moment.The three of them were completely immersed in the plot of the ending just now, and they never thought that Lu Anzhi would have such thoughts.

In their opinion, this ending is already very powerful. Although it is the ending of a great tragedy, which makes people very uncomfortable, but such a tragic ending can be arranged so magnificently and movingly without being bloody abrupt, it can be said to be quite powerful.

But now Lu Anzhi seems to be able to see from the ending that the ending is not going to work, which is really surprising.

How should I say it?As expected of writing a novel?
If Lu Anzhi knew what his father-in-law, mother-in-law and daughter-in-law thought, he would be speechless.After all, he actually copied novels, so where did he write novels?
However, he has copied so many novels, and he still has so many novels in his mind. He can indeed feel that there are still flaws in the ending of Gu Ruiyong's "Legend of the Heavenly Sword".

Lu Anzhi felt that Gu Ruiyong must have been very good at Chinese when he was in school.This is a perfect score for reading comprehension.He just said a word, and he completely interpreted the true thoughts in his heart.

"Brother Lu, if you have any suggestions or opinions, you can just say it directly! We brothers don't need to be so secretive."

Gu Ruiyong said on the phone.

Lu Anzhi said: "Then I'll just say it straight."

Gu Ruiyong said: "It's okay, let's talk straight. I'm all ears."

Lu Anzhi brewed a thought in his mind, and said: "That's right, I only watched the ending of this "Legend of the Sword of Heaven", and didn't read much of the previous plot. So I don't know if my understanding is a little bit Omissions.

"If you look at the ending alone, I always feel that the protagonist's emotions, contradictions, and conflicts with the so-called peace of the world are too shallow, so that the plot arrangement of him drawing his sword and committing suicide in the end is somewhat untenable."

"Can't stand?"

Gu Ruiyong muttered to himself.

"Yes."

Lu Anzhi said, "It's true that the protagonist pursues the world's peace, dies for the world's peace, and connects the cause and effect of the world's peace to himself. This ending is quite tragic. Brother Gu, your emotional rendering at the end is also in place But I think it's just too much taken for granted. Taking it for granted, it seems that the protagonist's ending is too irresponsible, not for the sake of the world, and even seems to be escaping. From the last episode, I can see that this way of thinking If it is not, it is in conflict with the character design of the protagonist. So it seems that the character cannot stand up."

Having said that, he added another sentence: "Of course, Brother Gu, your overall arrangement for this ending is very good. This flaw, most people can't feel it at all."

Gu Ruiyong said depressedly: "Don't you feel it?"

Obviously Lu Anzhi's words woke him up, and he also admitted that Lu Anzhi's statement was correct.But now he discovered this problem, it was too late.It made him a little depressed.

Depressed, Gu Ruiyong suddenly asked: "Then if it's you... Brother Lu, how would you arrange this plot?"

Lu Anzhi thought for a while, and said, "I can't make it. Unless I change the plot and characters from the beginning."

"Oh?"

Gu Ruiyong came out of curiosity.

Lu Anzhi said: "I will make changes to the protagonist's character and background from the very beginning, so that he himself will be in conflict. I haven't watched your drama much, so I can't say. But I can For example——

"For example, we set the plot in the Northern Song Dynasty. I would set the protagonist as a Khitan, but this Khitan lived in the Song Dynasty since he was a child, was raised by the Song Dynasty, and did not know his true identity. The protagonist should Under the upbringing of the Han people, he became an indomitable man, and he also possessed a certain status.

"But after the plot started, he was maliciously exposed as a Khitan. From then on, he was tolerated by Song people, but his experience from childhood to adulthood made him unable to completely sever him from Da Song. And his strength, and It allowed him to obtain a very high status in the Liao Kingdom, such as the king of the South Court.

"This protagonist is mixed between the hatred of the country and the nation. When the wheels of the war between Song and Liao are rolling, he uses his own force to force the Liao army to retreat. But in this way, he is not a Han, and Song Mingming has nothing to do with him However, he persecuted the Liao army, feeling sorry for his fellow clan and comrades, and was forced into a desperate situation by blood and ethics, so he committed suicide."

"hiss……"

Gu Ruiyong gasped.

And Miao Suqin and Zhang Yuzhi's eyes widened for a moment, and only then did they understand how powerful their son-in-law, a best-selling author, is. The character context is also conceived together.

Zhang Suxin blinked her eyes.She is different from Miao Suqin and Zhang Yuzhi. She has only one idea: her husband is worthy of being called a "sow with a knife" by netizens. Such a tragic plot is really fast and well edited.

Gu Ruiyong asked, "Do you have a complete idea for this outline?"

Lu Anzhi smiled and said: "Yes, I have already thought about the title of the book."

Gu Ruiyong asked: "What's your name?"

Lu Anzhi said: ""Dragon Ba Bu"."

Gu Ruiyong asked: "How to explain the title of this book?"

Lu Anzhi said: "The eight dragons come from the Buddhist scriptures, which can imply 'everything in the world'. I use this to draw out the theme of the novel, 'No one is wronged, and all love is evil'."

In fact, this statement came later. There is another saying in "Dragon and Babu", which is that when the novel was serialized, it only conceived the story of Dali Kingdom. Because Dali Kingdom advocates Buddhism, the title of the book "Tianlong Babu" fits the theme firstly, and secondly. You can write eight main characters.But later it was written that the geographical scope gradually expanded to Song and Liao, and the story became more grand, and it was hard to find the eight parts.

It's just that I can't tell Gu Ruiyong this way.So I had to say, "No one is wronged, and everyone who has love is evil."

Gu Ruiyong sighed deeply and said, "The title of this book is a bit too esoteric."

Lu Anzhi said: "But it's appropriate."

"It is."

Gu Ruiyong said suddenly, "Brother Lu, if you write this story into a novel, you must give it to me to shoot! If you want to give it to someone else, when the time comes to compare, the ending of my "Legend of the Heavenly Sword" will be black." History!"

Lu Anzhi said: "Then, are you still filming The Legend of the Condor Heroes?"

Gu Ruiyong said: "Shoot! Of course! Can I shoot both?"

Lu Anzhi said: "Then wait for "The Legend of the Condor Heroes". It will take some time before I finish writing this book, and I have other fairy tales to write, so "Dragon and Ba Bu" is too late."

Gu Ruiyong suddenly became depressed: "Then why did you mention "Dragon Babu" to me?!"

Lu Anzhi said: "Obviously you asked me for my opinion, so I gave you an example."

Gu Ruiyong: "..."

(End of this chapter)