Tokyo people don't talk about Wude

Chapter 96 Shocked me, I suddenly put it on the shelf

I just received an urgent notice from the editor, saying that it will be put on the shelves directly this Friday.You can take a look tonight, and those who like this book, please make a first order to support it, it only costs about ten cents.

After several rounds of recommendations for this book, the data is basically stuck here and remains stable.Unless I can do a big job against the sky in the future, there is no point in continuing to procrastinate.

The book's grades are subtle.It ranked ninth on the new book list of the whole site, and third on the new book list of light novels.Originally, I thought I should be able to go to Sanjiang, but I didn't.Later, I saw that Sanjiang only selected two books from one category in each issue, and I happened to be the third in my category in the same period, but the new book list ranked below me entered Sanjiang.Please call me the goalkeeper of Sanjiang in this wave.

Of course, there is nothing you can do if you don't go to Sanjiang, after all, you met two big guys at the same time.One is the author of a great master, and the other is a new book that is seamlessly opened after the completion of a masterpiece, and its influence is basically equal to that of a half-step master.In addition, they have colleagues in the early stage to help promote Zhang Tui, and I don't know my peers, and it is not necessary to get Zhang Tui.So if you look at my comment area, there are basically no comments like "recommended from "XXX"".

What's more, both of them wrote Wangdaowang articles that are more in line with the trend, but this time I wrote a relatively unpopular Tokyo article that is more rebellious.If both of their grades are not as good as mine, on the contrary, they should reflect on whether they are too broken.

After a little bit of nonsense, it’s time to get down to business, which is what I’ve been wanting to say since I serialized this novel.

First of all, "Tokyo People Don't Talk about Wu Mori" is a magical realism novel that is mainly funny and funny. There is no intention worth digging into, and there is no willingness to reflect social reality.The words and actions of any characters represent only their fictional values ​​and are not associated with the author himself.The author only intends to express a diverse and multi-thinking world, and to create characters with multi-faceted and complex characters, rather than all bad guys and bad villains.

My goal in writing this book must be the same as that of 99.9% of the contracted authors of the starting point, to earn manuscript fees and share some novel ideas of my own by the way.Internet literature is different from traditional literature in that its core is for people to entertain and enjoy hearing and seeing, not to spread and express any intense personal views.Therefore, I would like to ask all the judges not to take their seats, let alone be filled with righteous indignation.

When planning this book, I originally planned to write a love story in Tokyo, so I played "Sifu", "Persona 5", "Yakuza 7", "Eye of Judgment/Death", "Black Soul III", etc. It is a relatively warm and popular love development game, and I accidentally came into contact with unlimited fighting skills, so I finally finalized this "Tokyo People Don't Talk about Wu Mori".

Before putting it on the shelves, I saw the opinions of many readers-or rather, it is inevitable that there are many opinions.If I write a book on realistic subjects, readers will only complain that my writing is not realistic enough.If I write a book about fantasy, readers will only criticize me for not being magical enough.But this book is a "magical reality theme", so some readers will criticize me for not being magical enough, and some readers will criticize me for not being realistic enough, pulling me wildly on both sides.

The first focused question is about the behavioral logic of the book.Because it is a fantasy reality theme, it is easy for readers who only want to see pure reality or pure magic to criticize.For example, a reader in Chapter Fourteen and Five claimed to have "eat three Japanese legal documents", and finally came to the conclusion that the male lead would definitely go to jail, and then threatened to abandon the book if he couldn't read it anymore.To give another example, another reader said in chapter 24 and five: "Since you want to write Unlimited Martial Arts, just let the protagonist drive a dump truck into the school and hit the students from the news department, otherwise you will be selling it Dog meat, I want to give up the book."

Both of the above are extreme cases.My answer to the former one is: If you imagine that the actual law enforcement is so strong, and assume that the world is extremely hostile to the protagonist, why don’t you say that the protagonist swears a cruel word before fighting with the local hooligans? What about being photographed by the other party and sent to the detention center for "crime of intimidation" and "crime of insulting reputation"?
I have nothing to say about the second one.If the founder of "Unlimited Fighting Technique" is really a knight who hates evil, then you are the first villain he wants to get rid of.

Of course, these are just my examples. In fact, there are quite a lot of readers who have raised opinions in this regard.Rather than saying that my writing is particularly poor, it is better to say that I did not choose the subject matter well.In the next book, I'll focus on the fantasy theme. After all, I don't think my level is low when it comes to magic.

The second focused opinion is quite funny, which is about the background story of the protagonist in Chapter 3 who died bravely while traveling in Akihabara in his previous life.Although the Akihabara incident in the book has a male gun, it is essentially based on the "Akihabara Random Murder Incident" in 2008.So a group of "patriotic youths" with good roots ran out, cursing the protagonist as an idiot for saving the Japanese, and it would be better to save a Chinese who was crossing the road and was hit to death by a big truck.Some people also brought out the history of World War II, and it is rare to scold the author for being ungrateful.

There are indeed a group of so-called "patriotic youths" these days. Whenever they read a novel set in Dongying, they would like to have the protagonist say "everything is born to support people".It's better to add some "Monkey King Raid Gaotianyuan" and other bridges, and they will be excited to climax.

I always agree with a sentence: "The Chinese people and the Japanese people have only one enemy, that is, Japanese militarism and the Chinese national scum." If some readers think that they are more patriotic than the person who uttered this sentence, I think you should put down the novel, Do more practical things, instead of making things difficult for a low-level author with actions such as "smashing a Nissan car", and then running around telling everyone: "I have made a contribution! I have achieved it!"

Let’s stop this topic here, I’m afraid something will happen if I continue talking…

The rest are trivial comments.For example, some people think that the protagonist’s behavior is not violent enough, some people think that the protagonist is too extreme, some people think that the little villain can’t be good at cleansing and must be executed, and some people think that the protagonist’s life is just licking (as long as you dare to “lick” like this in reality) Girl, no one will provoke you in the future)...In short, I think these problems are caused by the imperfect design of this book, but the bigger reason is because this is a "magical reality theme", so it is easier Be nitpicking.

In addition, there is another big problem with my book, that is, it is relatively "anti-trend" and too anti-bone.

There are two main types of popular online novels: one is Feilu style, which simply uses the plot and imagination as the selling point, downplays the meaning of the characters as much as possible, and makes the characters serve the plot; the other is the traditional online style, Although it will focus on the plot and setting, it will focus more on shaping the characters.

But no matter how much the various styles are played, most authors will choose to create a "selfish" protagonist.Because this kind of protagonist is ordinary enough, it can make readers feel more involved.Just to give a few examples, the protagonist of "Lord of the Mysteries" started thinking about how to find a good job and backer, and worried about his own daily necessities; Family and friends.Even if they will become great later and become heroes who save the world, they are all selfish little people in the beginning.

In order to satisfy readers with high moral needs, some clever authors also deliberately arrange for the protagonist to save a few people "by the way" without affecting their own interests, or arrange for the protagonist to gain greater benefits while helping others, achieving a win-win situation.In this way, readers can complacently publicize to the outside world: "Look, the protagonist of this book is a benevolent person who is willing to give, and his values ​​​​are absolutely positive!"

Simply put, the basic logic of those best-selling novels is "the protagonist helps others for profit."But the logic of my book is reversed: "The protagonist benefits from helping others."I did create an obsessive protagonist who is a bit detached from ordinary people.There is no intuitive trick (such as the system), and there is no very intuitive harvest (basically what is harvested is contacts and reputation).He is an altruist, and he can be the protagonist purely because he is very capable and not stupid, and he knows how to keep a back hand to prevent being tricked.And because of the general structure of online articles, I will design so that he will be rewarded after every good deed, so that readers will not feel that the protagonist's behavior is meaningless.

I think this book is indeed against Tiangang, and it is no wonder that many readers have a lot of opinions and think it is impossible to read it.I understand this point, but it would be better to say that I am a bit slanted, so I haven't written a novel that "the people like to hear and see".

My purpose in writing this book is simple.I just think that some fresh blood can come from the starting point. Although this kind of blood may be rejected (meaning that the public cannot accept it), I just want to try this kind of excitement.Originally, I planned to write a book on the humanities of Xianxialezi. The routine should be similar to the previous wasteland love article, but I feel that if I don’t try new things and use my brain to break through my own possibilities, even if I become a master, I will become a master. If you stay stubborn, you will eventually lose everyone.

To say that the biggest mistake I made in the early stage of this book is that I paid too much attention to the comments of readers, and even dragged myself numb.After finishing the first volume (Incidents of the News Department), I started to feel uneasy. I didn’t know how to continue writing. I always wanted to meet the expectations of all readers, but I hesitated because of this.

This problem finally broke out in chapters 80-82, like the late silver period, and it was a hell of a job. Many readers who liked this book sent long comments and scolded me.Originally, these chapters were considered a small climax, and the plot was very simple. In Chapter 80, the senior sister goes undercover and finds out that she is involved in the underworld, and then decisively kidnaps hostages to confront them; in Chapters 81-82, the protagonist rushes in to save people.In fact, I have written all the outlines, as long as I can play freely in the middle.But the mental state during that time was not right. I wanted to write that the protagonist Lone Wolf went to a banquet and rushed in to kill the underworld alone, but I was afraid that the "realists" would say that the protagonist was impulsive, so why didn't he call the police for help; I wanted to write that the protagonist was stuck outside Call the police to shake people, and I am afraid that the "Magic Party" will say that the protagonist is bloodless.

The most terrible thing is that I did not write a strong sense of crisis in Chapter 80. The enemy is a group of mafia scammers. After the senior sister kidnapped a hostage, they dared not move for fear of death. trouble.The stalemate between the two sides lasted for half an hour, and there was plenty of time for the protagonist to shake people around before rushing in.As a result, many readers suddenly said, "The villain is not strong enough, very disappointed."To be honest, this kind of comment doesn't make any sense to me.A villain who has just entered college and can instigate minors to commit crimes is bound to be terrifying in reality, but how strong can he be against our righteous and insane protagonist?It can't be said that the Wano country is outstanding, every criminal organization must have a Professor Moriarty as standard, right?

But I was still in a hurry at the time, and I listened to the readers' opinions as soon as my head got hot, and temporarily revised 80 chapters.I made the villain's threat a little higher, and wrote that every second counts against the crisis of the senior sister, and if you are one minute late to save someone, you will die.But I changed it before but forgot to change it later. In the end, the logic collapsed, and the front and back were not smooth, which led to this oolong incident.

But this matter is mainly my fault. After all, maintaining a normal mind for readers is a must-have quality for an online writer.Readers have the right to post comments at will (otherwise I would have opened a featured comment section), but authors also have their own principles.

Compared with Japanese bowing and apologizing, I am better at correcting mistakes.I rewrote all these chapters that night, followed by major changes 2-3 times, and also changed some previous chapters to correct the logic of the protagonist's character as much as possible.Now in the latest version, I have basically remedied the logic and character problems, and the plot is more passionate than the first version.If I can think of a better idea in the future, I will change it again.I think I rewrote the plot of Beng three times for a few chapters. Is it not too much to praise me for "artisan spirit"?
In fact, I am also very glad that this problem broke out early.If this problem occurs after I put it on the shelves, then the chapters on the shelves will not be able to be changed casually like I am now.

After finishing this big job, I also began to reflect on why my state has deteriorated.In order to understand this problem, I learned how to call the smoke mirror ghost at home while beating the sandbag desperately, until the peak of my fist was bleeding and didn't stop.Three days later, I finally realized a truth...

The ghost call of the smoke mirror is very nice.

Not that I find that I'm a little bit astray, focusing too much on reader reviews and opinions.Everyone wants to please, but in the end, the requirements are too high, which is beyond the scope of their own abilities. Instead, they are self-defeating and forget what their original intention for writing this book is.

My original intention for writing this book is simple.I think that even when people grow up and mature, they start to become indifferent, selfish, sensitive, and turn a blind eye to other people's cries for help, and think this is the performance of "high IQ" and "high EQ"...But I still believe that there is something in people's heart A noble, romantic and crazy hero with a longing for all things good.

This book is like a spiritual continuation of the previous book—the happy person who just wanted to speed up to watch the fireworks was finally saved by love, and this book is a story about love and salvation.

Yes, this book is very naive and has a lot of slots in the eyes of many people.They prefer to watch stories with selfish protagonists and solipsistic style, which is the so-called "IQ online text".It might sound like I'm being sarcastic when I say this, but I'm not, because I've written this kind of book before, and I like to read it, I just wanted to try something new this time.

Finally, I want to ask myself again: "Do you think you are a writer?"

I don't think I am.

People like me who write books for manuscript fees and sensationalism can only be called "code-type service industry workers".Lu Xun once expressed a very interesting point of view: "Poetry exists in everyone's soul, and poets are to wake up the sleeping poetry in people's hearts."I think only those who have such awareness are qualified to be called writers.

Oh, by the way, ask for the first order again!Thanks!I will add more when it is on the shelves, I am still thinking about how much to add, it should be between 3-5?

——5/26/2023, sincerely, Chen, Tokyo Pure Love Warrior

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