Tokyo people don't talk about Wude

Chapter 86 About the Current Situation
After the two chapters were released yesterday, they quickly received unanimous negative comments from readers. The main problems focused on "unreasonable appearance of the characters", "unresolute actions of the protagonist" and "unsmooth logic".

In fact, these two chapters were not written by me.I fell asleep when I was typing that day, and when I woke up, I found that I had finished writing and sent it out. It was probably written by Raast for me.It has nothing to do with me, and I made a special statement to show everyone.

Today, I called Kayn out to rewrite these two chapters. I tried to fix as many logic bugs as possible and the abruptness of the characters when they appeared on the stage. I also paid attention to the emotional adjustment, hoping to make everyone a little satisfied.

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The following are straight:

I don't know what's going on recently, I feel something is wrong with my brain.When I wake up every day, I feel like I can’t secrete dopamine, and I have no passion for doing anything. The first thing I do when I turn on the computer is to think “I don’t want to write and write”, and I just want to play games, and then I feel like vomiting after playing games. I don't know what to do.

Writing is very passionate. If I can’t turn on blood anger when I’m typing, it’s easy to get stuck in the plot and I can’t write good content. I can only reluctantly follow the outline prepared in advance and slowly climb down.

It may be because of poor work and rest and sleeping too late.It may also be because the comment section of this book has mixed reviews, which affected my mentality.It may also be that I have lived alone for too long, and I have some mental problems.

My first task these days is to regain my passion for life so that I can continue to write good books.First, I adjust my work and rest, and then I try to exercise more and live a regular life. Then I also apply wind oil on my face to strengthen my blood anger when I think about coding.

Of course, the update will not be interrupted, which is the benefit of having the habit of saving manuscripts.

In short, the job of a web writer is to write works that readers love, whether it is writing popular or niche literature.This has always been my purpose.

Readers are dissatisfied, unless the author can justify himself, otherwise the author will correct it. I think this is something that must be done.

From now on, I will do my best to write stories that everyone can enjoy.If the readers who like this book are dissatisfied and make reasonable suggestions, I am willing to spend extra time to revise or rewrite it, even if I make less money and less code, it doesn’t matter. a lot of hobbies.

Then there is another problem, that is, it seems that some readers think that the senior sister was NTR after reading the original version of the first two chapters, which surprised me a bit.I currently have a manuscript and an outline behind me. I have never tried to write in this direction, nor have I even made any hints in this regard. I must clarify this point.

In the original version of the last chapter, what I originally wanted to express was that the mafia boss pretended to be drinking in another box, waiting for his subordinates to get things done outside.The senior sister hid in a different box, and the door hadn't been broken open yet.

I originally thought that readers would default to what happened to Senior Sister, right?As a result, some readers couldn't help thinking about the accident of the senior sister, which was beyond my expectation. Rather, it took seven or eight hours for me to realize that some readers thought I was writing NTR.

It seems that I still need to explain more about taboos in the future, or simply avoid any plots where the heroine is in crisis, so as not to cause unnecessary controversy.

So if you are worried that I will write about the male protagonist being NTR, please rest assured.I am essentially not interested in this kind of plot. If many readers feel that a certain plot is suggestive and make them feel that the male protagonist is NTR, I will basically modify it.

So good night everyone, I'm going to bed early today at five o'clock!

(End of this chapter)