Hong Kong Entertainment: The top class starts with great writers

A group of nephews and nephews often went to observe and observe, and Guo Zhishan was no exception. He was deeply impressed by Uncle Twelfth's sharp new font.

Guo Zhishan immediately picked up the manuscript and read it.

Ah, this Gai Junying is clearly Uncle Twelfth himself!

Seeing him playing the guitar over and over again while the heroine was learning a new song reminded Guo Zhishan of when he was a child, when he couldn't understand a math problem, Uncle Twelve would explain it to him over and over again!

Then, Uncle Twelve was defeated by his stubbornness, so he simply took the exercise book and wrote it for him.

But Twelfth Uncle's handwriting is too ugly, every time he has to wait for Twelfth Uncle to leave, secretly erase it and write it again.

Guo Zhishan continued to read:

When the heroine couldn't appear on stage because she didn't have costumes, he quietly bought the clothes and sent them to the heroine's friend!
Guo Zhishan clearly remembers that when he was a child, he was fascinated by a toy car, and cried for a long time, but his father refused to buy it for him, but he saw it the next day when he opened his eyes!

Later, Dad told him that Uncle Twelfth bought it secretly and asked Dad to put it on his bedside!

……

Guo Zhishan was filled with emotions, and suddenly thought, if the male protagonist is Twelve Uncle himself, then wouldn't the heroine be Twelve Uncle's ideal type? !
He immediately started from the beginning, focusing on the various descriptions of the heroine——

hum, hum, hum—

Guo Zhishan: "..."

This lady named Ling Mingyue, could it be that a mosquito has become a sperm?

He just feels dizzy now, and his ears are full of buzzing sounds!

Forget it, as long as Twelfth Uncle likes it.

Guo Zhishan felt that he had grasped the important information. After thinking about it, he found a pen and paper, and quickly copied the script.

It didn't look thick, and there were more than 20 pages in total. His fingers were numb after copying, so he decided to reward himself later by going to Kowloon to watch a movie.

As soon as he put down his pen, the door of the office was opened from the outside. Guo Zhishan didn't care to dry the ink, and hurriedly stuffed the stack of papers into his jacket pocket.

Guo Yunchen interviewed all morning, and these young actresses were fine with their lines alone, but when they acted with Ge Lan, they were defeated like a mountain.

He was in a bad mood, and when he saw his nephew, who was used to beating autumn winds, he didn't speak well: "Zhishan, what are you doing here?"

Guo Zhishan sneered with guilt: "I didn't do anything, grandpa called you home for dinner, let me do some errands."

This is true, he really came here today on official business.

Guo Yunchen nodded: "Understood."

After a pause, he asked, "Is there anything else?"

Guo Yunchen habitually took out the checkbook as he asked.

Guo Zhishan gained a lot today. Although he was greedy for Uncle Twelve's check, he knew enough was enough. He waved his hands repeatedly and said with a smile: "It's okay, it's okay, I'm leaving first!"

He had to go back and report the news. It was too late, and the new car in the dealership was picked up by someone else!
As far as he knows, there are quite a few people staring at this limited edition Maserati!

Seeing his nephew running away, Guo Yunchen put away the check book with some doubts: This is really not like Yan Guo's style.

Sitting at the desk, Guo Yunchen sighed, forget it, out of sight and out of mind, I won't go to the set for a few days.

If it really doesn't work, just make do with the filming like this, and then make do with the launch, with Ge Lan's name, no matter how bad the box office is, it won't be much worse!
It's just that there is always some reconciliation.

He abandoned his beloved song and dance drama and changed to make such a vernacular costume movie. In fact, he took a gamble in it——

Everyone makes movies. Pei Laoliu was able to win a series of awards at the Asian Film Festival with "Jiangshan Beauty", why couldn't he? !

Guo Yunchen stared blankly for a while, his eyes gradually focused on the desktop: he flipped through the two scripts sent by Hongchen Yixiao in the morning, and now these dozens of pages of scripts are still scattered on the desktop.

Seeing the familiar and pleasing font, he finally picked up the script again.

It took only half an hour to finish the twenty-page script, and Guo Yunchen's expression gradually became serious.

He discovered a problem, except that the heroine was a bit ironic, but in terms of structure, this script already possessed the four elements of the script's beginning, inheritance, and transformation.

According to Hollywood's routine, it is the beginning, setting up contradictions, resolving contradictions, setting up contradictions, resolving contradictions, and ending.

It started with the heroine’s poor family environment, and the first conflict occurred when she registered for the singing competition. In order to obstruct her, the heroine’s stepmother arranged a lot of housework for her. In the end, the heroine beat the deadline of the singing competition deadline and completed it. Sign up.

The second contradiction is the heroine's song selection, the third is the heroine's clothing, and the last contradiction comes from the obstruction of the stepmother. The heroine is almost unable to make it to the final stage.

It can be said that it is progressive layer by layer, and it can be said to be a qualified script.

Thinking about Hongchen Yixiao's first submission, how long has it been!

Guo Yunchen's gloomy mood has cleared up a lot. There is a feeling that the seeds that have been cultivated so hard have begun to sprout and bud, and now they just need to wait for the flowers to bloom.

He took the pen and wrote a reply:
Mr. Hongchen,

Hello, see the words as the face.

My handwriting has improved a lot now, please don't call me Mr. My handwriting is not so beautiful.

I have read the script. What is commendable is that it is already a qualified script compared to the previous letter.

However, if the script is divided into three grades according to the degree of excitement, ordinary, excellent, and excellent, this script can only be called ordinary.

After all, the story serves the characters, and the characters in turn promote the progress of the story.

If the characters are not attractive enough, the story will be difficult to be exciting.

Some other details are as follows:
First of all, the leading actor shouldn't have cake for breakfast every day... no matter how rich he is!
Secondly, he doesn't change into a new suit every day...even if he runs a garment factory!

Again, the actor wears a new suit every day, so why doesn't he even have a cloakroom, and why does he have to put a large wardrobe in the room?

Also, since the hero is so rich, doesn't the family have a swimming pool?Want to ask the heroine to go to the swimming pool?

……

More than a dozen strange details were picked out, and this mundane gentleman seems to have misunderstood the rich.

In the end, Guo Yunchen said that he is very much looking forward to Mr. Hongchen Yixiao's next script, hoping to reach an excellent level.

After he sealed the reply envelope, he realized that it was already three o'clock in the afternoon. Remembering what Guo Zhishan had said, he decided to go home early. It seemed that there must have been some major changes at home.

The uncle’s department store and the second uncle’s real estate have been in operation for many years and are as stable as a mountain. That is the third uncle’s shipping company or the fourth uncle’s gaming business.

While thinking about it, Guo Yunchen packed his briefcase and walked out. After going out, he handed the reply letter to Hong Chen to his assistant and ordered it to be mailed out as soon as possible.

Guo Yunchen: ... I still have a role in the next chapter, please don't change the channel, thank you.

Zhaza: That's tomorrow too, hurry up and step down!