After Song Huanxi finished writing the reply, her second sister Song Huanyun had already prepared dinner. The great singer now hummed a dog song while cooking, and was still doing housework without complaint.

Song Huanxi was very satisfied with this, and began to think about what theme to write for Lao Er's second song.

After dinner, it was Song Huanxi who was the only one to follow the rules of the dinner table: she had given up her second son's studies, and as for Wenzi——

No matter how bad it is, will it still be worse than the second child?

She couldn't help but pick up Editor Cha's letter again. She was still very angry after reading it again. How could the Governor of Hong Kong be so fickle!

Song Huanxi's mind unexpectedly flashed to Governor Bai's smiling face greeting people at the Governor's dinner. Then the next second, the Governor turned around and the smile on his face quickly disappeared!

What an impressive double-dealer!
and many more!

Song Huanxi's mind paused, and she suddenly realized that there was something wrong with the beginning of "Lotus Lantern" she had just written!
The characterization is not distinct enough!
It is true that the agarwood in her works is angular and has clear love and hate, but what about Liu Yanchang? !Where is the Three Holy Mothers? !
If her script is actually made into a movie and the audience watches it, who will remember the cowardly and useless Liu Yanchang?Who remembers the Third Holy Mother who was trapped under Zhenhua Mountain and only showed her face for a moment?

Song Huanxi suddenly remembered what Wujiubuhuan had said:

Even if it is a supporting character who comes out to make soy sauce, he must be made flesh and blood, cry and laugh, and have his own life. Only in this way can the novel come alive and make readers feel that the world you write is real!
Oops, how could she forget such a crucial thing!

Song Huanxi's eyes suddenly opened up, and when he looked at the first draft again, he felt that everything was difficult to see.

She simply grabbed both ends of the manuscript paper, used her hands hard, and directly tore the manuscript that she had been working on for a whole day into two halves!
Re-draft:

San Sheng Sheng was originally a lively person, but she was born into an immortal family and had the word "sacred" in her name, so her actions were inevitably limited.

The model her brother Yang Jian set for her was Guanyin Bodhisattva: Smiling like a Bodhisattva, speaking softly like a Bodhisattva, and standing high in the clouds, motionless like a Bodhisattva.

It's just... so difficult.

Fortunately, her brother also knew her true nature and allowed her to go out and play once a year.

As the saying goes, one day in heaven and one year on earth, the Three Holy Mothers automatically converted this year into the human calendar.

So, she can sneak out and play for a little while every day!
On this day, she met a dull scholar.

The weather was fine at that time, and the Three Holy Mothers were swimming by the West Lake. Suddenly the clouds began to gather, and a heavy rain was about to begin.

The Third Holy Mother knew that this was a warning from her brother - she had been hanging out for too long today and it was time to return to the Holy Palace.

Her magic power is not as good as that of her brother. If she insists on staying, she may be drowned.

But she was unwilling to give in. She looked around and found a scholar, carrying a bookcase on his back and an umbrella in his hand. He would look up at the sky anxiously from time to time and hurried on his way.

The Third Holy Mother immediately came forward and said, "My dear husband, you are so polite. I forgot to bring an umbrella when I went out. I wonder if I can borrow my husband's umbrella?"

The idiot replied angrily: "If it's just me, it's okay to lend my umbrella to my wife, but I still have a box of books, so I need to leave this umbrella for the books!"

Three Virgins: "..."

People are inferior to books, right?

At this moment, she just wished that the rain would come more violently!
The Third Holy Mother silently followed Du Gua, her brother's patience was always limited, and sure enough, it rained heavily without even taking a cup of tea.

Idiot immediately opened the umbrella, and as he said, the umbrella covered the bookcase completely, completely ignoring himself and the pretty little lady beside him!

The idiot didn't forget to tell the Third Holy Mother: "Little lady, please stand far away and don't let the water droplets on your body splash on the book box!"

Third Holy Mother: "...Ha." She silently took a half step back, making room for the bookcase as he wished, but still stubbornly followed him.

The Third Holy Mother looked up at the sky, thought for a moment, raised her hand and waved, and jumped twice, looking very happy.

Sure enough, her brother did not let her down, more black clouds began to gather, and a moment later, hailstones as big as peas hit her head crazily.

With a crash, the 30-year-old oil umbrella was completely scrapped, and at the same time, the rainwater and hail accumulated on the top of the umbrella poured onto the book box——

The stupid scholar was dumbfounded and turned his head to look at his book in disbelief.

The Third Holy Mother calmly moved her feet and kicked the silver scissors washed away by the rain into the ditch beside the road——

If she read it correctly, she had used these scissors last time to cut up a box of her brother's new clothes because he refused to take her to the Queen Mother's peach feast.

Oh, didn’t she just eat a few more peaches at the last peach feast, and even hid a few peach stones? With such delicious peaches, who wouldn’t want to plant a few in their own backyard!

Alas, my brother was so rigid that he didn’t even say a word without looking at the Queen Mother!
You probably knew that the sky was a bit excessive, and in a blink of an eye, the sky cleared up, leaving only some thunder lingering on the horizon, like a brother's incompetent roar.

When the wind stopped and the rain stopped, the suppressed sobs in her ears immediately became harsh. The Third Holy Mother turned around in surprise and found that Du Gua was holding a box of books and was already sobbing.

Three Virgins: "..."

Forgive her, she has seen her brother's roars and uncle's smiles too many times. This is the first time in her life that she has seen a man cry so inconspicuously.

The conscience that I haven't seen for a long time came up, and there was still a little pain.

The Third Holy Mother was silent for a moment. She first cast a spell to dry up a puddle of water on her body, then turned to look at the book box, took out a book, and shook the water on it——

Well, the rain has mixed with the ink stains and turned into a pool of black water.

She was holding the book at a loss, and the stupid scholar also came to his senses. He sniffed and took the book from her hand. Without raising his head, he said in a hoarse voice: "If I had known that I couldn't keep this book, it would be better to keep it." The umbrella is given to you."

Three Virgins: "..."

This idiot has said something humanly.

Her mood improved, she rolled her eyes and said generously: "Tell me the title of the book and I will compensate you!"

Idiot glanced at her and said seriously: "It's not you who ruined the book, what are you going to pay for!"

He looked lonely and stroked the cover of the book in his hand: "Besides, I copied this book one stroke at a time, so how can it be measured by money?"

The Third Holy Mother blurted out: "Then I will copy it for you!"

As soon as he finished speaking, there was thunder in the sky. If you look carefully, there is a golden dragon-like thunder swimming in it. In the ears of the Third Holy Mother, your brother's arrogant and cheerful laughter can be heard!
Since he takes the name of Holy, the Holy Word comes out of his mouth, the heaven and earth move accordingly, and the golden thunder comes in response to the oath!

If she can't do it, the golden thunder that would hurt even a god to the point of being knocked unconscious will fall on her!
But since she was young, the Three Holy Mothers have only hated two things -

One is reading,
The second is her brother who forces her to study!
...you won’t read the books I read!

right!I scanned the sports category on the monthly ticket list of the main website!
The first one got to the top by working against Jordan, and the second one started with Jordan as his backbone——

The third time I went to play football, Atletico Madrid went from being on the verge of being relegated to winning the Champions League!
Then my brother got into game writing and read another LoL!

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