Superpowers of Sky City

Chapter 46 Reflection and Summary
This is the end of this update, the next update is two days later, dice... oh no dice this time.

When I wanted to write a summary, the first thing that popped up in my mind was this sentence, should I say that it really is a habit.

Not much nonsense to start the conclusion of the first volume - having said that, this is my nonsense part, and it sounds strange to say that there is not much nonsense.

I am not used to the picture segmentation without the teacher of this department, so use the symbol to segment it.

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The first is the routine introspection session.

When I started writing an original story for the first time, there was really a lot to reflect on.

I tried my best to make the characters have distinct personalities, but I was so focused on the ability design that I ignored the personal characteristics. I have to say that I am inexperienced... Especially Lao Xu, who originally wanted to be a cold-faced and black-faced man, but because of his ability Need to explain why he looks like a good kp who is conscientious when running a group, it is really... Thank you for your hard work.

It is really difficult to create an original ability for the first time. Basically, everyone’s ability has more or less prototypes.The thing that frustrates me the most is Ms. Shigure, who came up with a good idea suitable for her and cheerfully completed the detailed settings of the water mirror and fairy shadow. It was only when I wrote it that I found out—hey, this punishment with light (from the catalog of forbidden books on magic, left The ability of Fang Zhi) is a bit like it.

Ah, really, I want to dig a hole and bury myself.But things have come to this point, and there is absolutely no way to temporarily change the script, so I can only bite the bullet and continue writing (sad)

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The feeling of getting used to writing posts in the past led to a lot of dialogue, and the lack of penmanship caused the characters to speak more or less homogeneously. When there are more characters in communication, it is a disaster.I will work hard to improve in this regard, and I must not let the next villain become as talkative as Lao Xu.

Narrative rhythm is also a problem that is difficult to control.The worldview introduction and setting explanation (the chat between Alice and Ah Ce when they first met) actually took three chapters, oh my god...

There were too many participants in the battle of the bad beasts, which made Mr. Takizawa, who was already very good at it, even more so...

The reasoning and landing link after the bad beast battle took up several chapters, which was longer than the beginning of explaining the world view and setting...

Looking back, I couldn't help covering my face and sighing.

I can't grasp the points in detail, and I always want to explain every point clearly in a long speech, and I want to explain everything related to it. This is really a bad habit of mine.

In addition, the tight timing of the story is also a problem.I originally wanted to add more daily jokes about dating Miss Alice, so that the contrast in the final confession would be even greater.It's a pity that there is only half a day, and the two of them have traveled half the city and can only talk a few words in their busy schedule, which is actually a pity.

The next volume will have to extend the story time a bit.

The prologue is inexplicable even now, doesn't it?I think so.But I really wanted to write it, I really wanted this scene to be the beginning of this story, so I put it anyway)

There are still many points to reflect on, but if I write them down one by one, it will become my reflection meeting.So let's turn this page and tell the story of this volume.

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The name of the first volume is superpowers and impermanent law, as the name mainly tells the story about impermanence.The impermanent magicians appearing in this volume are basically middle-level psychics, a few are high-level manifestations, and a creator who acts as a ceiling. How do you feel?
The law of impermanence is basically related to one's own heart. After seeing the ability, one can understand what kind of person he or she is to a certain extent. This is the keynote of this story.

Many of the characters that appeared in the first volume have deliberately made "double identities".Shi Yujun has grown from a handsome handsome man to a friend full of scars, Mo Yuankai has grown from a fat boy to a big brother, Yan Qi has grown from a masked man to a strong man, Qin Qianbai has changed from a simple man to a... wearing a mask Tie Hanhan (laughs).The most deliberate one is of course Miss Alice, who has changed from a helpful hunter to a prey on the run, from a good woman to a bad woman—the first hunter wanted Ah Ce’s heart, and so did the second hunter. .

The heroine of this volume is of course Miss Shigure Rei who also serves as the final boss.

What happens when a character who has always been good to the protagonist suddenly betrays and becomes a villain... The character designed with this idea is her.There is malice in my heart, but the congenial conversation is not false, I only love myself, but I also quite like the talkative gray-haired man I meet by chance.Among the words spoken by Alice's identity, how much is true and how much is false... Ah Ce should also be thinking about this at the end.As for the truth, only she knows.

At the beginning, I really wanted, really wanted to let Miss Shigure take the lunch box and leave the stage at the end of this volume.Jie Jie, it's time to kill a character!In the past, I had to be merciful when I wrote a post, but this time there is no reason not to receive a lunch box. The first one is you, Shigure Rei! !
——Actually, when I first started writing, I felt, it’s not good.

Since I have long thought that my character is weak, I prepared two outlines with nuances, namely killing Miss Zero and letting her go. When I wrote about ten chapters, the first outline was thrown into the trash can. .So Shi Yuling survived under Ah Ce's mercy and his younger brother's life-sacrificing help.The reason to do things later... should be gone to her, right?I guess so.

When I actually wrote it, I found that it was impossible to describe each character in depth, so Miss Qin, Shi Yujun and their stories were left for later. Since it is the heroine of the first volume, I still gave up the stage to Alice.

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The positioning of the first volume is an introduction to the most important content of this worldview, so an unexpected event was chosen.And after the second volume...

After playing a volume of impermanence, it's time for the superpowers to come out and play.

I think it's time for Ace to take a break, enjoy the daily life in the sky city, and have some superpower campus comedy to show the daily side of this city.By the way, the whole point Two-dimensional.

Love story?Ah, no hurry, no hurry.

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Regarding the number of words, I asked in the comment area before. Some friends said that the number of words in the current chapter is okay, and some friends said that it would be better to feel less.I intend to make a compromise. The relatively uninteresting over-the-top plot will be shortened as much as possible to complete a chapter within 2k words, and the rest will be maintained at the current level.If you have better suggestions, you are welcome to put them in the comment area or chapter reviews, whether it is about word count rhythm or other things. After all, I really have many shortcomings, and I have to listen to suggestions to improve a little bit.

And as with previous posts, I'm happy to see comments.

By the way, I won’t use the method of cheating on female characters for the second time, after all, it would be boring to repeat it again (

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Finally, thank you very much for your comments, favorites, recommended tickets, monthly tickets, and rewards!I really want to write a thank you at the end of the chapter when I receive it, but this may affect the reading experience, so I will leave it here to express my thanks.Really appreciate everyone's support!
After finishing the first volume, I have to save some time to revise the outline of the next volume, so the publication will be temporarily closed for the next two days, and the serialization will resume on Wednesday.Some of the character settings that appear in this volume, I will make a separate post in the comment area as before, and I will post it tomorrow.

So this is the end of this update, the next update will be in two days, the content is the second volume, stable and extraordinary.

(End of this chapter)