The beautiful girl who rejects me will regret it

Chapter 44 Contribution
When Fukuzawa Makoto came back from the bathroom, Akino Xiyuanji had already had iced coffee.

When Fukuzawa Makoto saw him, he immediately quickened his pace and returned to his seat.

"Good afternoon, Vice Minister." Akino Xiyuanji looked up at Fukuzawa Makoto, and took out the USB flash drive before she could speak.

Fukuzawa Makoto admired his dexterity, and immediately inserted the USB flash drive, opened the document, and adjusted to the reading mode.

"A short story of 12 words..." Fukuzawa Makoto whispered first, and then quickly plunged into the story.

The content of the current finalized draft is also different from what was written at the beginning. It can be seen that Akino Xiyuanji has listened to his own suggestions and made extensive revisions.

The modification is very good, very spiritual, and the writing style has also been established, which is a very great improvement.

So aside from the text, what about the story itself?

While Fukuzawa Makoto was reading the article carefully, Saiyuanji Akino was observing Fukuzawa Makoto's outfit today.

A white slim-fit shirt with lace, a pure black silk dress, and a waist tied at the waist, so that her petite figure can show a very good waist-to-leg ratio, so that her legs will not look short.

In addition to clothes, Makoto Fukuzawa is also very particular about her hairstyle. Today's hairstyle is a jellyfish head with a blue-gray beret.The jellyfish head is most suitable for young girls with a sense of youth. People with mature looks are difficult to control, and the beret improves the overall coordination of her outfit.

Xiyuanji Akino was thoughtful and felt that he had learned a lot.

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Half an hour later, Fukuzawa Makoto watched with tears in her eyes. She let the two lines of tears fall and closed the laptop contentedly.

"Very good, very good, and it did not disappoint me. This is a very good work, and many plots in it are very cleverly designed."

"Crossing time and space, memory loss, meeting at dusk, writing down the name but writing the words "I like you..." This is just right, but there is an extremely worrying emotional control..."

"Xiyuanji-kun, this is really good, very good!"

Fukuzawa Makoto couldn't suppress the excitement at this time, and her voice became a little louder.

Xiyuanji Akino said embarrassingly: "Calm down, please calm down first..."

Fukuzawa Makoto also realized that this is a maid cafe, and there are many people around. She coughed lightly and continued: "I don't have any suggestions for your current draft, and you don't need any revisions. Now you can directly Sent to editor for review."

"However, I have a few questions."

"You said."

"Mr. Xiyuansi, you said before that you wrote novels to make money, right? Before you met me, where did you want to submit your manuscripts?"

"Hmm...it's the OA Bunko's essay contest."

Fukuzawa Makoto nodded, turned on the laptop again, searched for the OA Bunko Essay Contest, and after a brief glance, said: "The process of the Essay Contest is usually relatively long, and there are still three days left before the deadline for the Essay Contest."

"Although winning the essay contest is a good gimmick, I think your work can be sold directly, and the quality of your work can be directly marketed."

"Write this novel in a week, Mr. Xiyuanji, are you short of money recently?"

Xiyuanji Akino nodded, "It's quite nervous."

"Then I suggest that you don't participate in this essay contest, and submit it directly to my publishing house. I can help you get the best price and resources, I swear!" Fukuzawa Makoto said very seriously.

Xiyuanji Akino was stunned for a moment, just as he was about to say something.

Fukuzawa Makoto continued: "What I recognize is your work. In my opinion, your work is very good, so I also hope that it can achieve the greatest success."

"If such a work will be overwhelmed due to various reasons, such as insufficient publicity, shady things in the essay competition, etc., I, as the first reader, will not be able to accept it, so, Mr. Xiyuan Temple, please don't refuse My help."

Seeing Fukuzawa Makoto's extremely serious expression, Xiyuanji Akino no longer hesitated, but solemnly nodded, "Then I'll leave it to you."

He will remember this kindness.

Today's gift will definitely be doubled back to Fukuzawa Makoto in the future.

Seeing that he agreed, Fukuzawa Makoto breathed a sigh of relief, and immediately took out his mobile phone to make a call.

"1-11-4, Sotokanda, Chiyoda-ku, Tokyo, homecafe maid shop, you are limited to 15 minutes, if you don't come, you will regret it forever." After saying this quickly, Fukuzawa Makoto hugged the laptop, Came to sit down beside Akino of Saiyuanji.

"Mr. Xiyuan Temple, the editor will be here soon. Before that, let's communicate with each other first. What do you think about the time of dusk and the plot design of traveling through time and space? Where does the inspiration come from? There is no reference work?" Fukuzawa Makoto's eyes are full of enthusiasm at this time, she looks like a little girl who bought her favorite toy, and her face is extremely rosy, very cute.

As a porter, Xiyuanji Akino can only answer her questions as best she can, but she still has to marvel at her love of reading, which can directly change her whole personality.

Maybe this is the real pure person?
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Ten minutes later, a panting middle-aged man with an afro broke into the maid shop.

He walks like a stranger, and when he comes to their table, he seems to have exhausted all his energy.

I saw the middle-aged man raised his head, and after locking on to Akino of Xiyuan Temple, he immediately showed a bright smile, "Hi, hello! Are you the author friend of Mr. Fukuzawa?"

"I am Yamada Muneki, the editor-in-chief of the light novel section of Asahi Publishing House. I don't know what your name is, teacher?" Yamada Muneki quickly handed over his business card, and asked Xiyuanji Akino with a smile.

Fukuzawa Makoto patted Xiyuanji Akino's arm, "You are worthy of the title of teacher, don't feel embarrassed."

Xiyuanji Akino was stunned for a moment, and then began to introduce himself.

"It turned out to be Teacher Xiyuanji. As expected of Teacher Fukuzawa's friend, he is indeed a good-looking talent..."

Fukuzawa Makoto interrupted him directly, and said, "Just read the book, and after reading it, you will know why I asked you to come."

When Yamada Muneki heard this, he nodded. He took the laptop, sat across from them, and soon began to read seriously.

Fifteen minutes later, the editor-in-chief saw that his face was flushed and his breathing was short of breath.

As an editor, his reading speed is naturally very fast, but he doesn't actually read it word by word, but to see the outline, the framework of the story, and the overall trend.

And after reading this way, the experience is smooth, full of emotions, the story is novel, and the plot is full of twists and turns.

It's really admirable.

As expected of Mr. Fukuzawa, every time I call myself, I will regret this sentence if I don’t come at the end, which means there must be a surprise.

Praise teacher Fukuzawa, praise teacher Xiyuanji!

Muneki Yamada has already seen the scene where their Asahi Publishing House is ushering in another big explosion in the future, seeing countless banknotes flying around him, and the boss praises him vigorously in public.

"Mr. Xiyuanji, please submit this novel to our Asahi Publishing House!!"

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Voting entry【Recommendation ticket】

(End of this chapter)