Reborn, I really don't want to fall in love

Chapter 40 Teaching to Yan Wei
"Don't worry, I'll take a good look and tell you."

Just now, Lin Yu's thoughts went to other places, and he didn't have time to read what Yan Wei wrote.

"Yeah, okay, senior, don't worry."

Although Yan Wei was very anxious in her heart, she still appeared not in a hurry on the surface, in order not to make Lin Yu unhappy.

Then Lin Yu stopped thinking about it and concentrated on reading the novel written by Yan Wei.

Although Lin Yu's writing level is not very high, he has been writing novels for several years. He is clear about some basic situations of novels, how to write them, and whether they are well written.

Soon, Lin Yu finished reading Yan Wei's opening chapter.

While Yan Wei looked at Lin Yu nervously.

Lin Yu spoke slowly.

"Your problem at the beginning is really big. There are still many things that need to be revised. If I were an editor, I would not agree with your review."

Lin Yu's words chilled Yan Wei's heart, and she could only bite her lips tightly.

"However, there are also many advantages."

This sentence made Yan Wei happy.

Hastily and happily asked:

"Senior Lin Yu, I still have advantages at the beginning of this article."

At this time, Yan Wei almost lost her confidence after being hit, so she couldn't wait.

Lin Yu glanced at the anxious Yan Wei, looked at his eager eyes, and then thought of Yan Wei who would stand on the podium two years later, four years later, she really had an inexplicable sense of contrast.

Lin Yu could imagine that after Yan Wei became famous after writing a book, she would stand under the spotlight and tell her story of writing a book. It was a novel taught to her by a "senior".

Taught her until she became famous.

That must be interesting.

Lin Yu looked at the anxious Yan Wei, smiled and said:

"Don't worry, I'll analyze it for you slowly."

But what Lin Yu didn't know was that Yan Wei at this time was also very shining in the school, and was the object of the admiration of countless boys in the school.

It's just that Yan Wei is usually very cold, which makes those boys discouraged.

There are only a small number of outstanding boys who dare to go forward and take the initiative to chase Yan Wei, but unfortunately, no one can catch up.

In the previous life, Lin Yu would work part-time whenever he had spare time, and he only thought about Li Yuxuan, and he didn't pay attention to other girls at all.

Lin Yu didn't even attend the school's evening party, otherwise it would be impossible not to know Yan Wei.

So Lin Yu didn't know Yan Wei very well.

"The first problem at the beginning of your article is that you use too much writing, resulting in only writing but no plot."

"Then your plot is too scattered. I know you want to write all the content in your mind. You can't wait to write it all at once. You can write a main line first, and then intersperse the branch lines."

At this time, Lin Yu, after knowing that the girl next to her was Yan Wei, did not deal with Yan Wei casually, but lectured very seriously, explaining his three or four years of writing experience to this novel one by one, Without the slightest reservation.

Lin Yu knew very well that if it wasn't for Yan Wei, he would not have embarked on this path. Yan Wei really helped him a little.

In addition, no one can deny himself, there must be a well-known beauty writer under his name.

later when chatting with others.

It is said that such and such a writer used to be his apprentice.

Then don't mention how face-saving it is.

Of course, there is absolutely no reason why Yan Wei is so beautiful.

Lin Yu is not that kind of person.

It just surprised Lin Yu, but it made sense.

After Yan Wei briefly explained how to write the beginning, not only could she understand it under Lin Yu's simple explanation, but she could also infer other cases from one instance.

As expected of a talented player, his comprehension ability is fast.

Lin Yu looked at Yan Wei's exquisite face, and couldn't help but admire in his heart:
"What's the matter, senior Lin Yu, what's wrong with what I said?"

Seeing Lin Yu looking at herself, Yan Wei felt a little embarrassed for some reason.

Watching the dodge of Yan Wei's eyes.

She smiled in her heart, at this time Yan Wei, no matter how cold she looked, she was still a little girl in her heart.

"No problem, you comprehend it very quickly. According to your understanding just now, if you change the beginning now, you will definitely improve a lot."

Lin Yu said solemnly.

I dare not say anything else. As for the drafting of the beginning, this Lin Yu really has absolute confidence. During his career in the street in those years, he wrote countless beginnings, and it was not for nothing.

Even later, Lin Yu didn't know how many of them he sold at the beginning of the sale.

If he hadn't been sanctioned later, Lin Yuguang could have made a lot of money just by selling his products.

"Really, thank you so much, senior Lin Yu, if it wasn't for you, I would probably be hit hard and don't know what to do."

At this time, Yan Wei no longer had the usual cold look of other boys, but said very excitedly:
"It's okay, your talent is also very good, stick to it, you will achieve unprecedented achievements in this line of work."

Lin Yu said very sincerely:
"Really, senior, I can really achieve certain achievements in this line of work."

Yan Wei looked at Lin Yu with beautiful eyes, a little in disbelief.

If it was the former Yan Wei, she would definitely be very confident, but recently, the constant rejections and the words of the editor really made Yan Wei wonder if she is really not suitable for this career.

But Yan Wei really wanted to be a writer.

"Really, truer than gold, I never tell lies."

Lin Yu said with a smile:

"Yeah, Senior Lin Yu, I will definitely work hard, and I will not let down your help to me."

Yan Wei looked at Lin Yu gratefully. If it was another boy who said this, Yan Wei just thought that the boy was trying to please her and said nice words.

But these words of affirmation came from Senior Lin Yu's mouth, but they made Yan Wei trust her very much.

Yan Wei believed that Lin Yu would definitely not lie to herself just to please her, and even in Yan Wei's heart, Lin Yu's senior was "not fierce" to herself, which was already pretty good.

"Then senior, I can sit beside you and write a book. If I have any questions, can I ask you for advice?"

Yan Wei summoned up her courage and said.

At this time, Yan Wei, who was always cold, also looked at Senior Lin Yu with embarrassment, for fear that Senior Lin Yu would reject her. After all, Senior Lin Yu didn't mind disturbing him when she was next to him.

But Yan Wei, who finished speaking, became a little nervous unconsciously. This was a feeling that Yan Wei had never felt before, even if she was speaking in front of the teachers and students of the whole grade, Yan Wei had never felt this nervous.

I'm afraid that Senior Lin Yu will reject him.

"Yeah, yes, you can sit down, as long as you don't bother yourself to type."

Lin Yu said indifferently.

As long as Yan Wei doesn't get close to her on purpose, it really doesn't affect Lin Yu. Moreover, it's pretty good that there is such a good-looking girl sitting next to her, so she can enjoy it if she has nothing to do.

"Really, senior, thank you so much."

Yan Wei was a little overjoyed, she thought Lin Yu would reject her.

"It's okay, just write well."

Lin Yu said.

Lin Yu looked at Yan Wei's happy face, and didn't know what to say. How could such a trivial matter make her so happy.

Lin Yu is now in the library, with the air conditioner blowing, and Yan Wei is sitting next to her, smelling the fragrance from Yan Wei's body.

On the other side, Jiang Zijing's side was much worse.

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(End of this chapter)