I just want to make alchemy, not to fall in love

Chapter 64 Send a single chapter and review it

After writing 14w words, the Qinghe volume is about to end, and it is time to write the line of Xiaojunzhu. The follow-up reading has been a bit broken these two days.

[-]. Some readers said that the relationship between Xu Gu and Jiang Du was very fast. This is true. I admit that there are two factors, one subjective and the other objective.

Subjectively, starting from Jiangdu himself, one can find from the very beginning that although Jiangdu is very cold, he is very simple. He believes in her father just because "I can see my sister" and also believes in Xu Gu who met her for the first time. , has been at Cangwu Peak, and hasn't been out much, Jiang Du actually has a kind of too naive stupidity.

Longing for her father to care about her, but not being cared about by her father, she has always foolishly hoped for her father. When Xu Gu came, a roasted rabbit was loved by others for the first time, so she couldn't help but have a little relationship with Xu Gu. A little closer.

Then it was because of the "dream", the dream of the previous life was the fastest reason for Jiang Du to give it up for nothing, she vaguely guessed that Xu Gu had helped her in the previous life, and the above were almost all subjective factors.

Objective factors, from my own point of view, I am a little anxious. I am writing a love essay for the first time. I don’t know the rhythm. I want to hold readers’ interest and push the emotional line quickly.

The combination of these two points is the reason why Jiang Du gave it for nothing so quickly. There is indeed a problem with the writing, and I will apologize to everyone.

[-]. The problem of segmentation, a short sentence and a paragraph, the beginning of the chapter has been complained by many readers. At the end of the chapter, I also listened to opinions and made revisions, hoping to save some.

[-]. The plot problem. Since the confession, when I returned to Cangwu Peak, there was no major ups and downs in the plot. Long, a bit boring, sorry.

Today, Master helped me point out the problems I wrote, and I will follow Master to correct it slowly.

A rehearsal was rehearsed in the class three days after May [-]st. After those few days, it was early morning coding again, and the quality of the chapters also declined. In the second half of the sophomore year, a bunch of elective courses began to end the class. The class is full, and the most outrageous thing is that it is a sophomore, and it is compulsory to study late?
The quality of the chapter has declined, and I apologize to everyone. The later writing is indeed not as exciting as the previous period, although the beginning of my previous period was not so exciting.

Let's write so much first, I apologize to everyone, and it will be put on the shelves soon, and then I will write the rest of what I want to say in the testimonials.

(End of this chapter)