Chapter 70 Summary
The "I am Yu Huanshui" volume is over, and I will make a summary as usual.

Let me talk about the rating first. If I do it myself, if I score 7.0 out of [-], I can probably give it around [-]——I know that many readers may think that this rating is a bit inflated. Don’t worry, just listen to my sophistry... Cough, justify .

My seven points are for the volume "I am Yu Huanshui".

What does that mean?

That is, if you just take out the content of this volume and read it, regardless of the previous text and the latter, you can still have a self-feeling score of 7 in this volume.

Personally, I have written almost everything I wanted to write in this volume before I wrote it.

In the end, Yu Huanshui's unwillingness and those who made him feel aggrieved were all vented and resolved.

but,

Everything is afraid of a but——

If you don't read this volume alone, but put it into the larger structure of the whole book, then the score of Yu Huan Shui's volume is probably only 3 points...or even lower.

Because the idea of ​​this volume is fundamentally wrong!

The title of my book is [Being a God in the World of Film and Television], so naturally, every copy that I want to write should also be closely related to the topic of [Shenhao].

It means that the protagonist goes to various worlds to pretend to be a god, even if he is not a god in the beginning, he should always become a god in the future.

But Yu Huanshui's volume is not,
This volume has nothing to do with the word "Shenhao" from the beginning to the end, and it is all slapped in the face by various parents.

(PS: In fact, some readers have already raised this opinion, and I saw it at the time, but I didn’t take it seriously, because I have written copies of Yu Huanshui in other books, and the key point is that there are too many copies The description of the plot that can be slapped in the face, I feel that it will be very good to write, so I haven’t changed it. Now that I think about it, it’s too simple to think about the problem)
Why did I say that reading Yu Huanshui's volume alone can give 7 points?
It is because under the premise of removing the 'Shenhao', it is possible to write these short face-slapping content from the parents, and even put this volume in the opening stage of the book is barely possible, because at that time the protagonist just started, and the short stories from the parents It's okay to start writing.

But I wrote about the world of the God of Medicine in the previous volume, and I also let the protagonist go to the level of ordering gangsters all over the world to help the protagonist sell medicine.

In other words, the character of the protagonist has already risen.

At this time, if I let the protagonist suddenly return to the parent's house and make a short pretense and slap in the face, the readers will have misplaced expectations.

To put it simply, the protagonist's coercion is obviously up, but what he does is still petty behavior, which seems to be very inconsistent with the protagonist's positioning.

This is clearly reflected in the data in this book——

Before writing the Yu Huanshui volume, the follow-up reading of this book was 1100. After writing this volume, the collection has increased by nearly 100, but the follow-up reading has only increased by [-], which is seriously out of balance.

Obviously, everyone chose to raise books.

……

Finally, let's summarize.

Compared with the God of Medicine, the volume of "Yu Huan Shui" has improved in the control of the plot. Although the results of this volume are not satisfactory, the plot direction is always in my writing, and there is no deviation.

The only, and also the biggest regret, is that this volume appears where it should not appear.

How do you say this?

I feel very helpless, because this is purely due to the lack of writing experience and the problem caused by it. It can only be said that it is the tuition fee that I have to pay on the way of writing.

I'm sorry for letting readers and gentlemen grow up with me, I'm sorry.

I will definitely learn from it in the future and will not make this mistake again.

Fortunately in misfortune,

This problem was discovered before charging. If it was after it was put on the shelves, then I would really be ashamed to face the readers who supported me with real money.

……

Let's talk about the follow-up.

Tomorrow, I will write two chapters of daily content to ease the rhythm, and officially enter the next volume the day after tomorrow——

"The Youngest Son of the Chaebol Family"

In this volume, the protagonist will truly become a god, and a top chaebol god who holds power in a country!

"Prosecutor Yoon's wife is in good shape, let him be the president."

After comparing several candidates, Chen Daojun said so.

 Thank you "Coke灬灬Chicken Wings" for the reward of 500 coins, thank you! !
  
 
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