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Chapter 37 Summary
Chapter 36,
8.13 words,

The copy of "The God of Medicine" is officially over.

If I were to rate this dungeon myself, it should be 8 points... No way, the remaining 92 points are really embarrassing to ask for more.

Just kidding, if the full score is 6.1, this dungeon should be around 6.2 or [-] in my opinion, barely passing.

When I designed the detailed outline before, I prepared the copy of "The God of Medicine" according to the classic three-act play.

trigger-conflict-resolve

Specifically, I divided the whole plot into three parts, mainly taking the strength of the protagonist and the enemy as the dividing point.

In the first part, the protagonist's enemy is Zhang Changlin;

In the second part, the protagonist's enemy is the police represented by Cao Bin;
In the third part, the protagonist's enemy is Nova Corporation.

Generally speaking, it is to fight monsters and upgrade, from small monsters to BOSS.

However, I thought very well, but when I actually wrote it, I was limited by my writing skills, so I couldn't grasp the coolness.

First the first part of the plot.

The opening 'trigger' is not well written.

What I imagine is that after the protagonist starts selling Glenin, it will affect Zhang Changlin's business and cause conflicts with him.

But after I actually wrote it, I realized that the portal is a bit big. As long as the protagonist is cautious, it should be difficult for Zhang Changlin to discover the identity of the protagonist.

So, after struggling for a long time, I improvised a plot where a patient registers to receive medicine, which made Zhang Changlin notice the protagonist, which seemed very deliberate and not smooth enough.

Fortunately, the following conflicts and resolutions are all planned, and there are no major mistakes.

Followed by the second part.

The three acts of this part have all been written according to plan, the problem is that my pen is not strong enough.

Originally, I thought that when Cao Bin offered to resign, it should be an emotional outburst, reflecting his transformation from blind obedience to his boss to sympathy for leukemia patients, and finally he chose disobedience.

But it's a pity that the author is really not good at writing this kind of emotional scenes, so that the expected effect was not achieved, and it didn't ignite when it should be ignited.

Finally the third part.

The 'triggering' of this part has actually been reflected in the previous two sections, so it is still silky smooth.

But the problem is that the 'conflict' part is a bit dragged on.

In fact, now that I think about it, the conflict between the protagonist and Nova Company is that Lu Qing’s sales of drugs have affected Nova Company’s profits. It’s fine to focus on this point, but when I wrote it, I felt that this was a bit thin, and at the same time, it didn’t completely break away from the movie. Influenced by the plot, Cheng Yong was brought out by extravagance, and two chapters of Natdo's plot were added, so the pace was much slower.

However, due to the slowness of the "conflict" part, the "resolution" part of the protagonist's reorganization of the global gangster must also be slowed down, because the content length will be equal in this way, and it will not be anticlimactic.

But this part of my original outline was not that long. After the protagonist reorganized the global gang, this dungeon ended. In order to balance the chapters before and after, I temporarily wrote the plot of the protagonist designing the reputation of Nova Corporation...

Now it seems that this part is a bit uncomfortable, and the gangster part can be expanded to increase the coolness.

……

Finally, let's summarize.

Overall, the completion of the copy of "The God of Medicine" is not bad, but the details are too rough, which is a typical example of an author with high eyesight and low hands. Giving a passing grade is already shameless.

In the past few days, I have been thinking about how to improve it myself, and the final solution is to write a detailed outline.

Especially the detailed outline of key nodes must be prepared.

Only by presenting the following plots in the mind with almost no difference, can the rhythm of the story be grasped and not deviate.

……

Preview,
Tomorrow's two chapters are about real life.

One is the transition, and the other is taking the time to polish the details of the next part.

The day after tomorrow, it will officially enter the next instance——

"I am Yu Huanshui"

When Yu Huanshui, the most miserable hero in the whole network, has the Shenhao system, what kind of tricks will he do?
Stay tuned!

At the same time, I also hope that everyone can continue to support the author, recommend tickets, monthly tickets, follow-up reading!
Thank you author!

Or2!

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