Emperor's Bane

Some Words at the End of Chapter 34
Ha, this volume is successfully completed~

In fact, this book can be regarded as a passionate opening. At that time, I submitted the manuscript and was rejected (the reason was that the beginning was too scattered and there were not many protagonists), so I thought about it and rushed to post it on the first day of December. up.

At present, although it is a bit rushed, it is generally not bad.

The plot of this book is roughly a step-by-step approach. Maybe the author will come up with some fantastic ideas when writing the next chapter. The general outline of the plot has only been pushed to the outbreak of the Great Rebellion, so you will find that I am I seldom write very clearly when ambushing pens, just to prevent eating books when the time comes (le).

The first volume can be regarded as carefully selected by me. The story of Dawn Xingxing in the Warhammer universe is both strange (it’s not a war but disaster relief) and very grimdark (it’s useless for a long time, and it’s still dead), but the actual writing There were still a lot of problems at the time, many places were not fully described, and many plots were promoted hastily (no way, for daily updates), for example, I didn’t write much about the aspect of Ahriman’s bad personality and bad popularity Come out, and the plot of Perturabo's handling of the planet's instruments was not intended to be the end of a chapter, but when the pen was actually written... it could only make do.

So readers can ask any questions, as long as there is not too much conflict with the author's basic ideas, I will try to change it.

By the way, here are two Primarchs: Perturabo's attitude towards Morgan is an appreciation for like-minded capable people, but he doesn't want to show this appreciation too obviously, he thinks it's weak .

This is also the reason why Perturabo suddenly lost his temper in Chapter 30: Magnus was dissatisfied with the healthy laughing attitude towards the capable person, so the impulsive side came to the fore in a short time...

Let’s go back to Magnus, the image of this Primarch is actually relatively negative in this volume, especially the part where he accidentally crushed a Thousand Sons to death with his own hands (some readers said that this part may be too... irritating , not quite suitable for the general style of writing).

When I shaped Magnus, I focused on his weakness as a scholar, compromise, escapism, and unwillingness to take responsibility, mainly for the sake of the plot. Otherwise, compare the combat effectiveness of Morgan and Magnus , there is no way to get Magnus's soul fragment calmly...

Sorry pony, I apologize to you.

And Morgan, I now have a fork in the shaping of Morgan, one is absolute selfishness and egoism (such as calculating Magnus), but such a protagonist... I don’t know if you can accept it.

The other is to gradually have some emotions, depending on the plot, maybe one day, Morgan will have the belief to actively fight for others (a little spoiler, this route points to our lovely archangel).

But it’s still a little early to say these things. What needs to be worried about now is the second volume. Compared with the first volume, the plot of the second volume will be very large. The Ran Dan War will affect at least nine legions and several primarchs. I also plan to have a part of the Second Legion appear in this volume.

The number one character in the second volume must be Jonson the Lion King. This person...is very difficult to get along with...

I don't even want the Lion King's soul fragments extravagantly. If Morgan can get a little Lion King's trust here, it will be considered a success. I have to think carefully about what kind of guy the Lion King likes.

Secondly, I also plan to create an outstanding figure of the Second Legion, probably the second person of the Legion of Sevita's type, reliable and powerful.

In short, the above are the author's personal trivial thoughts and feelings. You can put forward any opinions in the comment area, or you can join the group. The group number is the one at the top of the comment area.

(End of this chapter)