Shenhao with a learning panel

She has been a Chinese teacher for many years, and she has a solid knowledge of literature and history. She also liked to write something in the past. Li Shi immediately thought of herself and felt that she was quite similar to him.

Because of these reserves, in his plan, he plans to write novels to spread the way of calligraphy in the future.

And if you want Bai Mangmang to find a hobby and get out of the depression of cranky thinking, writing should be a good suggestion.

"When you say writing, do you mean writing prose poetry, or writing novels?"

Bai Mangmang: "I had them all back then. I mainly wrote novels. At that time, I especially liked reading martial arts novels. Jin Yong's, Gu Long's, Wu Ji's, and Li Liang's. I also started to write a little bit."

Bai Mangmang: "Jin Yong Gu Long, you should know that Wu Ji and Li Liang are two martial arts authors, you young people may not have heard of them, right?"

The corner of Li Shi's mouth twitched: "Student Xiaobai, are you very old? You actually call me 'Little Young'?"

After a while, Bai Mangmang: "Uh, that's not true (smirk)"

Li Shi blinked and typed: "Well, I am indeed young, but I am not young anymore. You can tell by my name, the stubborn stone is very big! (Sinister smile)"

After sending it, I suddenly felt a different kind of "sneaky", as if I had tasted the joy of chatting with her while hiding my identity.

Bai Mangmang: "(knock head) (knock head)"

Seeing the head-knocking emoticon pack sent, Li Shi felt that she was not angry, on the contrary, she seemed quite happy.

Li Shi opened the browser, searched for the two martial arts writers, and said: "I have never heard of these two before. I just searched and found out that I have never seen their works before."

Bai Mangmang: "It's normal, you all read online novels now, I told you before, in fact, sometimes I also read online novels, there used to be some students in class who peeked at novels in class, and I confiscated them. It's called "Earth Master", written by an online writer named Xu Gongzi Shengzhi. After I took it back to the office, I flipped through it out of curiosity. I didn't expect it to be really good. During the summer vacation, I was idle and bored, and I went to read all the books by that author."

"Master"?
Li Shi has an impression.

He was about to search when Bai Mangmang sent another message: "Quietly tell you, in fact, I secretly wrote a book on the Internet. I wrote [-] words intermittently. I didn't tell anyone, not even my family. I know! (hehe) (shy)”

Li Shi was taken aback for a moment.

There is a sense of absurdity that I have not tried my best, and suddenly find that the other party has already stood at the end.

In turn it felt normal again.

Both myself and her are people who love to read books, and such people often have a dream of being a writer.

In today's Internet era where anyone can write, there are too many people who try to write online articles, such as my college classmate Liu Zhengdong.

Otherwise, the number of Internet writers who have written Internet articles cannot be as high as 3000 to [-] million.

He smiled and asked, "What's the name of the book, and which website is it posted on, I'll go and have a look."

Bai Mangmang: "Do you really want to read it? I don't think my writing is very good, I'm a little ashamed."

Seeing that Li Shi wanted to see it, Bai Mangmang hesitated.

Li Shi has also created, but he understands this feeling. After all, this is a private matter that she has been hiding all along. Showing it to herself is to show the most private thing in front of her...

"I really want to see it!"

"Okay, let me show you. The title of the book is "The Only Handle of the Eternal Immortal Sword". It is on the Qidian Chinese website. After you read it, don't laugh at my bad writing."

Li Shi swore: "I am not that kind of person!"

Click on the app, enter the name, and quickly search for this book.

"The author's name is actually 'Bai Gongzi Mangmang'. Compared with the QQ name 'Bai Mangmang', it is her at first glance. Adding 'Grand Master' is a bit masculine, but that's right, her book was posted on Qidian Men's Channel. "

Li Shi read the introduction first, then clicked on the text, and browsed quickly.

Of course, there is nothing to say about the white writing style, which is condensed and sophisticated, with outstanding literary talent, and it is also written on the theme of fairy tales, but the content style is still a bit traditional, whether it is the title, introduction, or the scenery and background description in the opening paragraph, it is very important for readers to read. For readers who are accustomed to online articles, it may not be very attractive.

A total of [-] words, completed two years ago, without signing.

After turning through a few chapters, Li Shi originally planned to quit, but suddenly saw a large description of a special scene, and his eyes widened a bit.

The protagonist in the book, Sang Wen, obtained the first fairy sword "Zixiao Sword" in ancient times, and used this sword to kill a snake demon for the first time, but unfortunately, he was poisoned by the snake demon. After being poisoned, the Lord looked extremely uncomfortable and painful, and he couldn't bear it, so the two sacrificed their lives to detoxify him!
Gee!

This kind of bloody and vulgar plot, under her excellent writing, is actually written in a subtle way, but it makes people's blood spurt, and Li Shi's eyes are straightened.

"This Teacher Bai, she really... understands it too well."

"Besides, the male lead, Tou Tang, is still in that relationship with the two women. Her inner world seems to be worthy of speculation."

Li Shi suddenly felt that Teacher Bai had great potential in creating web articles. It would be a pity if she didn't write web articles, and it would be a loss for the entire industry.

I quickly flipped through more than a dozen chapters, and saw a few similar plots. I stopped and read it twice, and I felt more and more responsible and necessary to "pull" such a writer with great potential to where he should have been. Come in her industry!
In the past two months, he found that although the number of online novels is overwhelming, there are actually very few authors and works that can attract him to read.

After thinking about it, Li Shi logged into the Qidian app with his QQ account, added her book to the bookshelf, and posted a few more comments.

Then I clicked on the QQ dialogue interface and started typing: "Mangmang, are you sure this is the first book you wrote? You can't lie to me, right?"

In a community in Jieyang, it was still the balcony of the master bedroom. She was lying on the couch in white, with her legs slightly curled up, outlining a graceful curve. She was leaning on the edge of the couch, holding her mobile phone, and was waiting for Li Shi's feedback.

I feel a little nervous.

This is really the first time she has shown the online novel she secretly wrote to others.

"Why do you have the feeling of going to a beauty pageant in a swimsuit and being judged by the judges?"

Bai Mangmang stretched out his hand to stroke the gray hair on the left temple.

At this time, QQ rang, and she quickly picked it up to look at it.

Seeing that "Stubborn Stone" actually questioned himself, he became anxious.

Quickly typed and replied: "What did I lie to you, this book is really the first time I wrote it, I feel like I made a lot of newcomer mistakes, and I didn't even sign the contract in the end."

Li Shi was waiting for her to say that.

"Can the first novel be written so well?"

"Except that you don't know much about the routines of web articles, you are excellent in other aspects!!"

"Especially the writing style, which is much better than ordinary Internet authors!"

"And your description of the scene is so delicate, and the details of ancient life are also very sophisticated. It's just that, reading your book, I can even have an antique picture in front of my eyes!!"

"I really like your writing style!!"

"Mang Mang, why don't you hurry up and start a new book, I can't wait to read your new work!!"

……

A series of exclamation marks bombarded Bai Mangmang directly.

Secretly writing this book two years ago, because she failed to sign a contract with the platform and no readers read it, she often felt very disappointed and lost.

I even doubted my writing ability for a while.

When did she enjoy this kind of treatment when writing novels!
Faced with Li Shi's series of rainbow farts, she suddenly felt that she had finally met a bosom reader, someone who understood her!

The depression hidden in my heart because of this experience suddenly dissipated.

She felt numb in her heart, very comfortable.

Open a new book?

Bai Mangmang was a little moved for a moment.

Or, write another one?
But soon hesitated again.

If she was asked to write traditional novels, she would be confident, but she would not be able to write online articles.

Bai Mangmang: "Do you really think my novel is well written?"

Bai Mangmang: "But I can't even sign a contract, and I feel that I don't know much about online literature."

Li Shi thought for a while, and replied: "I have been reading online novels for a long time. I started to get in touch with them ten years ago, and I have read a lot in the past few months. I have also studied how to create them. In your current situation, it is just Like an embroiderer who just came out of the mountain, although she is ingenious and has a high level, she still doesn't know what patterns of embroidery are popular in the market, as long as you understand the market, everything can be easily solved!"

Li Shi: "We can take our time and don't rush to write a popular work. Let's write a work that can be signed first, and then pursue other works."

Li Shi: "Anyway, I will be your first reader, and also your most loyal reader!!"

An embroiderer who doesn't understand the market?
Bai Mangmang couldn't help laughing, he thought Li Shi's metaphor was very interesting, and after thinking about it further, he found it very reasonable.

Indeed, I mainly read less online novels.

At this time, QQ rang again.

Li Shi: "And as long as you don't tell me, no one except me will know that you are writing online articles. Even if they know that you are writing, they still don't know what you are writing and which book it is, so what are you afraid of?!! "

Bai Mangman couldn't help nodding.

That's right, no one knows that I wrote it anyway, and besides, I have resigned now and stay at home, so I can write with the door open and aboveboard!
After a while, she seemed to make up her mind.

Bai Mangmang: "Then I will try to write another book? Anyway, I am idle."

Bai Mangmang: "But before writing this time, I have to read more online articles. Well, if I want to write, I still want to write Xianxia, ​​or a historical traversal article like "Celebrating More Than Years", the original work of that drama I've seen it too, and I feel that type, I can try it too."

Bai Mangmang: "What do you think?"

Li Shi knew that she would need to be affirmed, and immediately said: "Well, you have solid historical knowledge and good writing style. I also think that in addition to Xianxia, ​​historical writing can also be tried! Anyway, I support you in whatever you write! These two types I just like to watch it. (Smiling face)”

Bai Mangmang stood up with his two beautiful legs side by side, resting his head on his knees, hugging his hands, holding his mobile phone, with a slightly excited smile on his face. Sure enough, he also likes these two types of novels.

Suddenly I felt a tightness in my chest, so I quickly straightened my back to make the distance between my body and my legs wider, so that I could breathe more smoothly, and then I typed: "Well, Wanshi, if I want to write, you can always give me As a staff officer?"

A smile appeared on the corner of Li Shi's mouth again: "Of course, I can give you some advice now, you can give me advice."

Bai Mangmang hurriedly asked: "What suggestion, tell me."

Li Shi: "Take your previous book "The Only Handle of the Eternal Immortal Sword" as an example. You wrote the story of the protagonist growing up through the Zixiao Sword after obtaining the Zixiao Sword. In the article, the protagonist borrows the idea of ​​cheating to upgrade, but the writing is too traditional."

"If the starting point of the creation is slightly changed, and the idea of ​​'how to write will make the readers more enjoyable' to create, in this way, even if it is the same plot, it will be more popular with readers."

"The other thing is the title and introduction of the book. I feel that it is not attractive enough. It is better to choose the name according to the popular style nowadays. Moreover, the introduction should not be too literary and artistic. It should be easy to understand, and write out the highlights and tricks that attract readers. "

"For example, if the title of the book is "I Have a Purple Sword", maybe it will be more popular with readers."

……

Bai Mangmang: "Yeah, I've written it down, I'll think about it, is there anything else?"

Li Shi suddenly remembered his "original intention", blinked, and said: "The last point is the most important (呲牙), that is, no matter how you change, your novel writing has an advantage that must be maintained, such as Chapter 7, you describe The plot of the interaction between the male lead and the female lead is very well written, from the description of the scene to the atmosphere, especially during the interaction, the body and mind conflicts between the characters, the physical and mental feelings and changes brought about... that vivid and accurate description , the delicate brushstrokes that make people feel like they are in it must be carried forward."

Ok?
At first glance, Bai Mangmang didn't quite understand what Li Shi was talking about.

When did the hero and heroine I wrote have a physical conflict?

She suddenly thought of something, and hurriedly opened the novel app that she had just reinstalled, found "The Only Handle of the Eternal Immortal Sword" written by herself, quickly turned the page, and quickly turned to the target chapter "Chapter 7 Killing the Snake Demon, Sangwen Poisoned".

The more I read the content, the more blushed my face became.

And she also saw little bubbles after certain paragraphs.

Click on one and find that it is a comment sent by a reader.

Stubborn Stone Chaoda: "The author's writing is so good, it makes my blood boil!"

Uh

The white crystal toes subconsciously contracted.

There is only one word difference between "the stubborn stone is super big" and "the stubborn stone is very big". Looking at the comment time, it was just posted.

That's right, when I wrote it two years ago, there were no comments from readers.

Bai Mangmang took a screenshot and sent it to Li Shi: "Is this what you commented on?" (rolled eyes)"

Li Shi didn't deny it: "Yes, it's me. (Smiling face)"

Bai Mangmang: "Do you like to watch this kind of plot?"

Li Shi: "It's because your writing is so good that it makes you feel very immersive when you read it. Well, in layman's terms, it makes readers feel very good when you read it. (Haha)"

This is the advantage of online chatting, you can say any bold words directly, anyway, you can't see the other person's face, so you don't feel embarrassed.

He didn't know, when Bai Mangman saw his reply, his face became crimson.

She felt that she hadn't been so shy in many years.

After a while, a series of (knocking on the head) emoticons came.

Bai Mangmang: "(Hmph) I didn't expect you to be such a stubborn rock, it's too dishonest."

... (end of this chapter)