At first, I just wanted to make money

Chapter 33 Promise me, don't be a licking dog!
It's not that Shen Xudong hasn't changed at all...

The Kang Min he wrote follows the original, not the kind of Pan Jinlian...

Kang Min's character actually fits well with a motif in literature, which is called seduction, rejection and false accusation!

Not Pan Jinlian!

Pan Jinlian is just a slut - this woman is good in every way, and the leader loves to steal men.There are poems to prove: Jinlian's appearance is even more unbelievable, and she frowned with Chunshan's eight-character eyebrows with a smile.If you meet a romantic child, you will steal the time when you wait for the wind and rain.

What about Kangmin?
Narcissistic, extreme, and vicious, she harmed Xiao Feng only because Xiao Feng rarely looked at her in Luoyang Baihua Association, and her way of revenge against Duan Zhengchun was to kill him!

Beauty is just a prop for her revenge...

Why write this on purpose?
Because... There is this paragraph in my memory: Mr. Jin Yong said that he was dissatisfied with the image of Kang Min in "Dragon and Babu", especially "shaping a character like Pan Jinlian"...

Even so, Shen Xudong was still very anxious...

After all, emails and text messages have been sent for the past two days, and there has been no response.

Ready for something else!

Then I got a call, not from Zhang Jizhong himself, but from Mr. Dai Mingyu, the chief screenwriter of "Dragon Ba Bu", and directly said, 'Welcome juniors to join the screenwriting team of "Dragon Ba Bu"! '

Of course, Shen Xudong is all kinds of thanks...

By the way, Dai Mingyu is from the Department of Directing Chinese Drama, Grade 96. He is from a family - he wrote the screenplay "I Love My Family" with Mr. Liang Zuo when he was in college!

……

I received the screenwriting job of "Dragon Babu" in my freshman year. What does it mean?
At least in the small circle of screenwriters, Zhao Linhai, Liao Gaoxiang, Zhao Xin, including Shen Xudong, became famous!

The circle of screenwriters is small.

Some people describe the status of screenwriters in the crew: In addition to producers, directors, actors, post-production, lighting, props, scene notes, drama management, camera, dubbing, scene management, art, special effects, stand-ins, recordings, there is no one with the right...

That is, the existence of the bottom.

How should I put it, if you don't report to the group, you really don't have any right to speak!

By the way, what kind of screenwriter is the best?
Write a giant screenplay?

No, but you followed a big-name actor.

Basically, big-name actors will bring two screenwriters into the group to be responsible for adding scenes to themselves. The director can't hold back the scene. The script is changed and changed again and again. I can't speak well.

So the original screenwriter was fucked up, and the two screenwriters changed a lot, which can be called the highlight moment of screenwriting in the history of Chinese film...

Of course, the most important thing for a screenwriter is to have the ability. The process of screenwriting struggle is actually the process of gradually accumulating word of mouth.

If the producers, directors, and investors who work with you every time are full of praise for you and think you are particularly valuable, then they will look for you next time and introduce other opportunities to you.

But then again, you have no name and no points, who will use you?

So getting started is key!
Shen Xudong's start was very good, even with the other three people in the dormitory, the start was different--the screenwriter of "Tian Long Ba Bu"!
Zhang Jizhong's Jin Yong drama is the most popular drama nowadays...

Being able to join this crew as a screenwriter is a great start!
Although I only received ten episodes - from Chapter 11 to Chapter 21.

It was Duan Yu who was taken away from Dali by Jiumozhi's acupoints to Qiaofeng to be engaged to Azhu Yanmenguan...

So, of course that treat...

……

“Actually, it’s quite difficult—a lot of original lines must be consistent with the original lines in terms of writing style, but also be familiar with ancient and modern meanings. It can be said that they dance with handcuffs…”

"Jin Yong's style is hard to imitate."

"Most of Jin Yong's works use the technique of line drawing. The text never deliberately pursues magnificence, and it is rarely lyrical. No matter how ups and downs the plot is, what Jin Lao talks about is flat.

"In comparison, Gu Long's style is actually the best to imitate!"

At the dining table, a group of people chatted about the screenwriting work of "Tianlong"...

"I think the most difficult thing is the 97 version of "Tian Long Ba Bu" with pearls and jade in front..."

Everyone is silent...

Shen Xudong interjected: "I don't think Huang Rihua's acting is very good..."

"what?"

"Felix Wong's acting is not good?"

"The Hong Kong version of "Tianlong Babu" Qiao Feng is a textbook hero. Do you still remember the opening chapter of "Tianlong Babu"? The opening chapter is that the disciples of the Beggar Gang broke into the Xixia Palace and encountered the four villains. Seeing that they were no match, Qiao Feng came out and cast the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms in the air, repelling all the wicked Xixia soldiers. His subordinates looked up at 45 degrees and shouted: Master! This is a very typical hero's appearance!"

"Because of this, there are a large number of character interaction scenes, emphasizing the expression of emotion, so it is reflected in the film and television, that is, a large number of close-ups, large close-ups, and medium shots like this."

"The tall, majestic, upright and awe-inspiring image is named Qiao Feng. The real Qiao Feng, in most of the book, is not fighting for justice, but fighting against fate. He is ruthless, so Can say such cruel lines as 'the bastard is the first to kill you'. "

"Huang Rihua's version of Qiao Feng is too upright, and almost deviates from the core idea of ​​"fate"...You must know that the prototype of Qiao Feng is based on the ancient Greek tragic hero, who fights against fate and then leads to a tragic ending!"

After a pause, Shen Xudong added: "But TVB "Dragon Babu" is indeed a classic...whether it is lighting, photography, even if it is an adaptation, it is also very good-looking! It's just that his Qiao Feng is too different from the book. How big! Qiao Feng in the book dared to kill a black-hearted doctor at the age of seven!"

Qiao Feng told A'Zhu about this matter. When he was seven years old, he quietly assassinated the unscrupulous doctor who bullied his mother. During the week of his plan, he was so tolerant and decisive that A'Zhu was shocked into a cold sweat!
It's hard for you to imagine Huang Rihua's version of Qiao Feng doing such a thing!

Zhao Linhai also said: "That's right, that's right, the original book said: Although the Beggar Gang is the largest gang in the Jianghu, the gangsters in the gang are all beggars, after all, they are not high-class people who pay attention to etiquette, so Qiao Feng must be There are more gangsters than righteous ones!"

"Then... So, we have a chance to surpass the Hong Kong version?"

"How can it be so easy...Even if the actors are done well, photography, lighting, camera movement and so on are still difficult..."

"A mirror?"

"The TV screen is only so big. Many rural areas still use black and white TVs with very low resolution. It is impossible for more than 6 people to appear on the stage at the same time. Therefore, the martial arts filmed by TVB has a lot of close-up shots, and they don't even give full body portraits of the actors... The audience looks like Comfortable! Judging from "Swordsman", Zhang Jizhong's Jin Yong dramas especially like large panoramas and long-distance shots... This is very unfriendly to the audience!"

"Damn, you... actually thought of this level?"

"... "

Shen Xudong didn't know how to answer...

These are all summed up by later generations!
In the bearded version of Jin Yong's drama, the fighting scenes are basically "the camera turns to the face, then a gust of wind blows the hair away, freezes for a few seconds, and then suddenly starts fighting with a sandstorm"...

Sometimes I even doubt whether "Water Margin" was produced by Zhang Jizhong. Why didn't Wu Song fight the tiger and just stop in slow motion?
As for the exterior...

If the costumes, color palette, and actors' performances can't keep up, it's easy to steal the scene on location!
Including the harmony of the qin and se in "Swordsman", Liu Zhengfeng and Qu Yang are sitting on the mountains and rivers, with a long artistic conception...

But this Nima is not a photo!
Television is dynamic, dominated by characters and stories…

Good-looking is good-looking, but the scenery is too big, the characters are too small, and the TV screen is only so big, it seems very empty...

You have to be full and full!
This is also the reason why many people say, 'I came to see martial arts, not to read a travel guide'...

The best one is actually "Game of Thrones". "Game of Thrones" is not short of money, and it rarely uses real scenes. Once it uses on-site locations, the tone is lowered, so that you have a vague sense of grandeur. I feel, but I don’t have a specific impression of the location, so I can avoid stealing the scene from the location...

Liao Gaoxiang waved his hand: "Anyway, we are only responsible for writing the script...just do our job well!"

"I'm just making fun of it..."

……

After paying the bill, the students went back to their dormitories.

The group of four was also preparing to go back to the dormitory, Liao Gaoxiang suddenly said: "I have something to do..."

"Looking for Tang Yan again?" Zhao Linhai advised him, "Be careful, I feel like you're a little stuck!"

Shen Xudong was unmoved...

Who cares, anyway, he didn't plan to talk about a partner during college anyway-how can talking about a partner be interesting for making money?
"Fuck me, am I bored..."

Liao Gaoxiang wants to explain...

Zhao Xin interrupted him: "Go, I hope you don't come back tonight!"

"Fourth, do you have any instructions?"

"...Second brother, promise me, don't be a licking dog!"

"Lick the dog?"

"A person who is desperate to please others, You Tanzhi in "Dragon Babu" is a typical dog licking!"

Liao Gaoxiang left with a dark face...

For no reason, Zhao Linhai said with emotion: "Sure enough, college students should pursue love!"

Shen Xu Dongfu came to his heart and said: "When love is right, it is love, but if love is wrong, it is youth?"

"...Yo, do you understand? What about rape?"

Zhao Xin answered: "If you make a mistake, go to the cell, if you make a mistake, you can get married!"

"... "

Shen Xudong was a little speechless, is this thing the same thing?
(End of this chapter)