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Chapter 17 I Recommend?I'm an idiot
Script writing, especially if the original work itself is exciting enough, it is best to write according to the original work.

In fact, this version of the script of "Shooting the Condors" is considered the best adaptation version recognized by later generations!

However, Mr. Jin Yong commented on the 03 edition of "Shooting the Condors" in the original time and space: "The shooting was serious, the investment was huge, and it was roughly based on the original work. I am basically satisfied, but I am not satisfied with the additions and changes..."

"The best is some scenes shot on the grasslands of Inner Mongolia. The battles, galloping horses, Mongolian life, etc. are all shot very well. Guo Jing's confrontation with Ouyang Feng in the desert is well handled.

Li Yapeng and Zhou Xun acted very well, Hong Qigong, Huang Yaoshi, Ouyang Feng, Qiu Chuji, etc., Mei Chaofeng is very good, and Mu Nianci's performance is also very good, it's a pity that the screenwriter randomly added scenes, screwed up her role and so did Yang Kang. "

"The worst thing is that many scenes with Yang Kang and Mu Nianci were added, and the scene with the heroic image of Wanyan Honglie at the end was added. It is disgusting and greatly damaged the work."

That's right, he thinks Li Yapeng and Zhou Xun's performances are excellent...

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Do you really understand "Shooting the Condors"?

Guo Jing has a calm demeanor, calm and dignified, introverted and modest, it is impossible for him to look up at any time like Li Aopeng to pretend to be stupid, showing an expression of who is calling me from time to time...

Most of the audience commented: Li Yupeng's version of Guo Jing has the demeanor of the protagonist of Zheng Zeshi's Fat Cat Looking for Relatives, and even his acting skills are very similar.

As for his complaints about the screenwriter...

It still makes sense. Class 03 "Shooting the Condors", in order to perfect Wanyan Honglie's character design, gave him a feeling that his mind was sober and sometimes confused, and when he was sober, it seemed as if he had been read by Jinshi. There is a bright sword Tian Moxuan commented on the excessive sense of advancement of the current situation.

What was the problem with Jin Guo at that time?
Wen Tian and Wu Xi, he Wan Yan Honglie does not fight for power and reform the bad political and military habits of the Jin Kingdom, but idles around all day long, entrusting the fate of the country to an unknown military book for opportunism. Isn't this self-destruction?
When did you see Genghis Khan pondering Wu Mu's suicide note and collecting martial arts masters?

No!

What Genghis Khan used more was the general who commanded the army who was good at fighting and resourceful, not the second-rate sects in the rivers and lakes. How did he teach Torre?
Don't worry about Torre learning the martial arts of the Seven Monsters of the South of the Yangtze River, and he needs to learn more about fighting skills. Let's see how Wanyan Honglie taught Yang Kang?I just wondered how capable Yang Kang would be when he joined the army and fought with a few martial arts masters as his teachers.
It is impossible for such a person to say, 'How can I, a prince of the Great Jin Kingdom, be bound by you, a Mongolian chief?How can my Wanyan Honglie's life and death be controlled by others?Good to die!The country is destroyed, the family is gone, life is better than death, what is the point of living!In troubled times, when you are born at the right time, you live like a dog, and you die like a human! '

But... Then again, from the screenwriter's point of view: Only the strength and viciousness of the enemy can reflect the hard-won victory of the heroes.

In martial arts novels, everything is quack-like, but you can’t make everything quack-like when you make it into a TV series!

The best Jin Yong drama "Jade Blood Sword" produced by Zhang Dabeard is like this-according to historical facts, he added a lot of drama to Chongzhen, and even used Chongzhen's mouth to say that Yuan Chonghuan was talking empty words and beheading Mao Wenlong privately, which caused Jin Yong to drive straight in. This is obviously different from Jin Yong. The idea of ​​writing Yuan Chonghuan as Wei Guangzheng is different, but it looks comfortable like this!

It is understandable to add a little political IQ to Wanyan Honglie, after all, he should have this IQ in his position.

Just like many anti-Japanese dramas, the Japanese army died generously...

Many big bosses of the Japanese army refused to surrender in the end, and the samurai who shouted that I am the emperor will fall like cherry blossoms, and we will not interpret this as the scriptwriter to whitewash the Japanese army, right?

Of course, the biggest problem with the 03 edition of "Shooting the Condors" is the hero and heroine...

Especially Zhou Xun, the little beggar immediately abandoned the show as soon as he opened his mouth!

However, there is no need to show Wanyan Honglie's political wisdom in the section of Qu San Tavern...

Quanzhen Seven Sons, Huang Yaoshi, Mei Chaofeng, Jiangnan Six Heroes, Ouyang Feng, the Six Kings of the Kingdom of Jin and his entourage, Hong Qigong and Zhou Botong, Lu Guanying and Cheng Yaojia, etc., appeared one by one.

Searching for and snatching Wu Mu's suicide note, the duel between Quanzhen Seven Sons and Huang Yaoshi, many things happened here.

Shen Xudong compiled basically according to the original work...

A four-act play, corresponding to grievances and hatreds.

The theme of the scene in the first act is the word "en";

After Guo and Huang entered the secret room, the first thing they saw was Wanyan Honglie and others walking into the tavern with "Wu Mu's Suicide Note".Why do we say this theme is "en", because at this time Yang Kang has completely recognized the thief as his father and vowed to follow; and Wanyan Honglie also used various rhetoric to express that he has long regarded Yang Kang as his own son, and the world they will fight in the future will be their father and son of.

The reason why Yang Kang is willing to accept the thief as his father is because of Wanyan Honglie's so-called "nurture grace" to him.However, the world is unpredictable, "Wu Mu's Suicide Note" is not in the iron box, and Yang Kang's efforts were in vain after all...

The theme of the scene in the second act is the word "resentment";

After Wanyan Honglie and the others left, Hou Tonghai and the other four stayed behind and ran into the secret room by mistake. They were frightened away by the ghost played by Huang Rong and Huang Yaoshi respectively.

Hou Tonghai and the others had the courage to go and return, but unexpectedly met the real Huang Yaoshi and retreated again. Such bullying and fearful people are typical people who create resentment.

Also related to the word "resentment" is that Ouyang Ke did not change his life after breaking his leg. He molested the later Cheng Yaojia and Mu Nianci, and was finally killed by Yang Kang, who had planned a plan long ago, and put the blame on Guo Jing. Duan grievances can be described as very complicated;
The theme of the scene in the third act is the word "love".

Cheng Yaojia and Lu Guanying fell in love with each other in the tavern. Huang Yaoshi thought of his daughter's death, so he tried his best to promote the marriage between the two, and ordered them to get married immediately and have a bridal chamber on the spot.

Although it is true that Cheng and Lu are in love with each other, Huang Yaoshi's approach is really brain-opening, no wonder he is called "Huang Laoxie".There are related scenes that express "love": Mei Chaofeng blocked Ouyang Feng's blow for the master, and the love of the nurse; Guo Jing finally rushed out of the secret room and was injured, also to protect the master;

The theme of the scene in the fourth act is the word "resentment".

In the tavern, because they listened to Qiu Qianchi's slander, the Quanzhen Seven Sons reported their hatred for Guo Jing and Zhou Bo, and fought with Huang Yaoshi, which directly resulted in the death of Mei Chaofeng, and the death of one of the Quanzhen Seven Sons. Liang Zi.

There are also the Jiangnan Seven Monsters who finally came to look for Guo Jing. Huang Yaoshi was also eager to avenge his daughter, so he blamed them, and the two sides fought.

If it wasn't for Guo Jing's eagerness to save his master and rushing out of the block, there must have been another casualty.

In fact, the various complexes of grievances and hatreds in Qu San Tavern have various cruxes, such as Huang Yaoshi's weird personality, Ouyang Ke's self-inflicted consequences, and Qiu Qianchi, the iron palm gang.

On the surface, this grievance was artificially fooled, but its essence was Wanyan Honglie's conspiracy behind the Iron Palm Gang, and it was a direct manifestation of his grievances with the Southern Song martial arts people.

From Guo Jing and Huang Rong's point of view, the seven days and seven nights stories of grievances and grievances they watched as outsiders basically had everything to do with themselves.

In the face of the complicated world, individuals seem to be able to stay out of it and see through the grievances of the rivers and lakes, but in fact they cannot avoid it and get involved in the grievances of the rivers and lakes. This is probably the so-called "people can't help themselves in the rivers and lakes"!

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It took three full days to write this episode!

It's just too much...

No way, Liao Gaoxiang assisted in writing the second act, Zhao Linhai assisted in writing the third act, and Zhao Xin was in charge of the food...

After finally finishing the work, Shen Xudong said: "I will definitely buy a computer when I save up to 5000 yuan!"

"...type on a computer?"

"Um…"

Liao Gaoxiang nodded: "...It's really inconvenient without a computer..."

"Pair it with a second-hand one and use it first!"

"Going to Zhongguancun, it will cost four to five thousand for one..."

"notebook?"

"Laptops can't be bought without 8000 yuan, I'm talking about desktops!"

"We don't seem to allow the use of high-power electrical appliances..."

"Is a computer considered a high-power electrical appliance?"

Zhao Xin shook his head: "It doesn't count, the kilowatts are considered high-power electrical appliances. The maximum desktop computer host is only 300-400W..."

Liao Gaoxiang interjected: "I have one at home, next time I go home, I will bring it here..."

"It's more convenient to use a notebook, and it's easy to carry..."

"Of course I know that laptops are convenient, but we don't have money!"

While chatting, Shen Xudong's cell phone rang, and he quickly took it out to have a look...Cao Xiwen sent a text message...

Oh, under normal circumstances, it is all SMS communication.

The phone is too expensive, China Bank card, one-way fee, no monthly rent, 6 cents per minute, standard for college students.

Asked if he was going to meet Zhang Jizhong, Shen Xudong replied: "Yes, the teacher wants to introduce me to the production team of "Shooting the Condor" as a screenwriter!"

"You will be able to follow the group as soon as you are a freshman?"

"You don't need to talk to the team, it should be a joint screenwriter, the chief screenwriter issues tasks, we can just write..."

"Then can you recommend me, I want to play "Shooting the Condor"..."

Shen Xudong was a little speechless...

I recommend?
What am I, what do I recommend?
(End of this chapter)