I run a travel agency in the cultivation world

Chapter 53
I saw a book friend yesterday asking me if this is about a travel agency?Sorry to tell you, no.

At first it was called "Stepping into Cultivation", but this name is not friendly to newcomers. Compared with the works of the same period, my name is so common to the extreme.So I changed my name.

The purpose is to attract strangers, click on it to have a look.

Because of the name change, I always had to pull the main line to the travel agency, so I cut a large part of the plot. Experienced book friends should know that after Yang Zhao came out of Cangcheng, there should be a way to accumulate and upgrade his own force value. stage, to get ready for the next meteor shower, but I cut that part in order to fast-forward to getting the key item for the travel agency.As a result, she was also aggrieved in the meteor shower, and I was very entangled in writing.

I'm not good at writing, it's my first time writing, and I don't have much experience, I can't write anything exciting, and the plot drags on slowly. In order to speed up the pace, I cut off the plots of many small characters.

For example, the little boy in the old shop of the Qian family in Cangcheng, I owe him a scene, he and the watchman who was taken away by Fang Shuli are father and son, he is reluctant to destroy good clothes when he sees them, but selling them is not good for the female tenant Well, he gave this suit to his father, who was a watchman, and his father worked at night, and no one could see him in this suit.His little bit of greed brought danger to his father. He should apologize to Yang Zhao after the incident. In the beginning, Yang Zhao gave him a reward, and he took the reward to apologize to Yang Zhao.

But no, I designed too many little characters like this. If everyone has his own behavioral logic, the protagonist will not be able to appear.It is suspected that there are too many words after writing, and the little people can't give him too much ink. For an online novel, they are just NPCs.

Why do I worry about these small people, because I am a small person in reality, and my behavior is also logical.

I thought very well when I wasn't writing a book. Although I couldn't write any good works, I must let these people have their own logic in what they do.

But as soon as I wrote it, I found it was impossible. There are only a few protagonists in a book, and you can’t write out the logic of everyone’s behavior, especially for slow-moving articles like mine. Will no one like to watch it.

I found that I still care more about the feelings of the book friends who can read this book.

But I communicated with the editor-in-chief. My editor-in-chief is very nice. He said that changing the name will not bring you back. Changing the name frequently is not good for the novel, but I don’t need to always cut the outline. If the name does not match the reality, the name does not match the reality. Write at my pace.

The luckiest thing for me was that when I was a novice, I met a very good editor-in-chief, Huajiao. He answered my stupid questions one by one impatiently, helped me solve a series of accidents, and let me follow my Write at your own pace, don't be influenced by others.

So it's still the above question, sorry, I'm selling dog meat.

Travel agencies are not the point.

(End of this chapter)