Start North America 1400: nation building

Chapter 72 [71] voted

early morning.

Jonah's living room was as cold as ice.

The middle-aged man is sitting at the dining table writing, only a cup of hot coffee is used to keep warm.Jonah couldn't drink coffee before, and the coffee and coffee pot were bought by the Asian yesterday.

He still feels a little eccentric until now, and he doesn't understand why he agreed to cooperate by mistake.

In one night, he completed the first third of the "Balanced Canon".

The opening title is: Genesis.

Exactly the same as God created the world, first create a magnificent mythical worldview.The difference is that the "Equilibrium Scripture" directly uses modern scientific theories——

The Lord of Balance created the solar system 46 billion years ago.

So there is the sun, the star, and the eight planets, of which the blue star is one.

Human beings are not created by gods, but reproduce naturally.

The narrative of a few thousand words at the beginning is not like a religious superstition, but more like a popular science book for children... A Hundred Thousand Whys of the Planet.

As for the birth time of the solar system and the universe, nothing is mentioned.

This is what is required in the syllabus.

Zhou Li'an's idea has always been very clear, and the subject system that has not been fully verified cannot appear in the "Equilibrium Canon", lest it be overthrown by later generations.

For example, the Bible says that God created man, first created the man Adam, and then created Eve Barabara from his rib.

The time span covered in the Bible is only more than [-] years, and the Great Flood occurred more than [-] years ago.

but?
Modern well-documented remains of ancient humans date back more than 150 million years.

Can a certain Jesus slap his face?Man was created thousands of years ago?Thousands of years ago, a great flood was launched to destroy the world ah?

This is their fatal injury, and it is impossible to recover!

Why do so many people believe in a religion with huge flaws? It is nothing more than a spiritual sustenance of self-deception.

What attracts people to be kind and comforts the soul.

After all, this is a history book, a part of the development and changes of human spiritual civilization.

The ancestors of Westerners have believed in it for so many years. If it is completely overthrown, what is the difference from spitting on the grave of the ancestors?
I can't hold back my face.

Furthermore, you can never wake up a person who is pretending to be asleep. They just believe in it and follow it as a cultural system.

Similar to little girls obsessed with rice circle culture...

The idol's black material was picked up and the house collapsed.The little fan girl will also say: "Brother didn't do it on purpose, he apologized, you can be too heartless, you don't know how to feel sorry for your brother."

After a period of time passes, idols can continue to be active.

A certain Jesus is also a truth.

Dirty material?Vulnerabilities?flaw?

The big idol with more than two billion fans in the world, still doesn't allow someone to make a mistake?
Don't be unreasonable. Brother Jesus has been popular for thousands of years and has brought spiritual comfort to tens of billions of people. Can't you be considerate of old artists?
With lessons learned from the past, the great master of balance certainly cannot make the same mistakes.

Cover it with later scientific theories, and wait for people to do a little bit of research to find that astronomy and paleontology are the same as described in the "Equilibrium Scripture".

Next, the mathematical method, physical method, chemical method, etc. of the "Balanced Book" will be launched.

Then "The Holy Book of Balance" is no longer a purely religious book, but a scientific textbook.

Genesis describes the general development of human history.

end of chapter.

The Lord of Equilibrium crossed the void and descended again to the solar system he created to do educational and guiding work for human development.

As for why the Lord of Balance is free to guide mankind?
Zhou Li'an did not give a complete 'writing guidance suggestion', Luke Jonah himself wrote——

"The meaning of the true god is indescribable."

Just like a movie with an open ending, leaving a thread, as for how to weave it later, it is all up to personal will.

a thousand reader with a thousand hamurate.

Mindfulness is a good thing.

So ever.

After writing it all night, Luke Jonah became more and more excited as he wrote it. After drinking three or four pots of coffee, his mouth felt sour.

His whole body was cold and began to shiver, but he didn't care, he forgot to sleep and eat.

Because, for him, this is a critical process, catching loopholes from the Bible and exposing the hypocrisy of religion bit by bit.

In reality, he is obsequious, but on the Internet...ah, no, on the notebook, he punches hard.

The more perfect the Lord of Balance is, the more it becomes apparent that certain Jesus has huge flaws.

This is very cool for him.

Eight in the morning.

Patricia got up, and a puppy rushed out, wandering around anxiously.

The last one couldn't bear it, and squatted on Luke Jonah's feet to pee.

He woke up suddenly.

I just felt a very comfortable warmth rising from the cold and stiff feet, just like taking a hot bath in winter, the feet are hot.

But when he lowered his head again, "Fuck, damn it, you stupid dog!"

Gouzi was startled away.

Patricia came out and looked at her father fixedly.

In front of his daughter, Jonah didn't have any temper. He took a deep breath and stood up: "Patricia, let me make you breakfast, that... that Asian guy bought a lot of ingredients for you yesterday... "

He forgot that person's name for a while, and after a whole night spent all his mental energy, his mind was in a mess, and he couldn't remember it... In fact, he was never told what to call him.

After he stood up, he felt dizzy again.

There seems to be a curtain covering the eyes, and nothing can be seen.

puff.

He fell down on the spot and fell into a coma.

When consciousness regained consciousness, when Jonah opened his eyes, he saw a white ceiling and soft light.

There was a smell of disinfectant in the air.

A handsome Asian face came into his sight, "Are you awake?"

"Me, where am I?"

"Hospital, you are in a coma! Fortunately, I am here today, otherwise you would be frozen into a popsicle in your living room."

"Patric..."

"Dogs are not allowed in the hospital. She is playing with dogs downstairs. Don't worry, she listens to me and won't run around."

playing with dogs?

So, I'm hospitalized in a coma and my daughter is playing with the dog?
Even though he knew very well that his daughter had psychological defects, there was still a sense of sadness in his heart.

"You still have a fever and are malnourished. The doctor suggested that you stay in the hospital for observation. I will pay for the medical expenses, which are considered employee benefits and not included in your manuscript fee."

"I read the manuscript you wrote. It's great. I can continue after I'm discharged from the hospital."

"It's already noon. I'll take Patricia to dinner. There are nurses in the hospital to take care of you, so I won't accompany you. After all, someone has to take care of your daughter."

After speaking, he was ready to leave.

The man on the hospital bed made a weak voice: "Oh!"

Zhou Li'an turned around.

"Thank you."

"Ha ha."

"By the way, what's your name?"

"You can call me Zhou. There is a disposable mobile phone in the drawer and my phone number. If you have anything to do, you can call me. Let's go."

"Thank you... please take care of Patricia, you... are a good person."

"Hehe, let's go."

Luke Jonah is a talent.

Professionalism was recognized by Zhou Li'an, and he said that he wrote the manuscript all night, which was very satisfying.

After careful consideration by Zhou Li'an, he couldn't find any loopholes, so he could directly translate it into teaching materials.

Go downstairs and leave the hospital.

On the way, I met a few acquaintances and exchanged pleasantries.

This is the unit he used to work for.

However, the tea is cold, and this year's short-haired girlfriends can be strangers even if they don't deal with each other, and the friendship between colleagues is not worth mentioning.

PARKING LOT.

Patricia teased the little dog, a Labrador, still all black, with a slightly menacing appearance because of its bony skin.

drip.

Pressed the door lock.

Zhou Li'an waved: "Let's go, go eat."

The little girl settled down, but still glanced at the hospital building.

"Luke is fine, I asked a nurse to take care of him, you come with me."

The two and a dog got into the car immediately.

Originally, she wanted to take her to the old Wang's restaurant for Chinese food, but she brought up the old story again: "Gun."

Zhou Li'an smiled, turned around and went home, fulfilling his promise.

Hood Farm.

Patricia put on her body armor and stood in the open to take aim.

Boom! !

After the loud noise of the pistol firing, the wine bottle in front of it was used as a target and was intact.

She is not discouraged either.

Boom boom boom!
After a continuous shooting, she was not afraid at all, but was frantic and excited.

When the barrel of the gun became hot and her hands were numb from the shock, she reluctantly ended.

He lowered his head, staring at the frayed little tender hands in a daze.

Zhou Li'an performed his stunt again.

He conjured trauma spray out of thin air and sprayed it on the wound on her hand.

Patricia said a full sentence, no more jumping words: "How do you do it? Can you teach me?"

At this time, Zhou Li'an probably understood how Xuenv felt back then.

"You, can talk?"

She didn't feel offended, nodded, and organized her words for a while: "I went to middle school, but because I broke a boy's leg with a chair, I was expelled from school."

"Why do you do that?"

"He wrote me love letters...I don't like him, irritable."

Zhou Li'an looked at her, she was a pretty girl, and she mourned for three seconds for a certain brave male classmate.

night.

Zhou Li'an felt a little numb.

Send the girl home, and she is alone, unsafe and agitated, and goes to the street to beat people.

Said to take her to the hospital, but she did not let go of the dog.

In the end, Zhou Li'an could only keep her and called Jonah.

Jonah was not worried about his daughter's accident.

Instead, he reminded Zhou Li'an to pay attention to safety, and his daughter went crazy and refused to recognize her relatives.

That night.

Zhou Li'an did not travel through time, but found someone in the WeChat group to introduce the translator.

The group is full of former college classmates. Of course, they look down on this translation job, but they can recommend relatives who come to study abroad, or younger students.

Several are still PhD students and have connections in college.

Soon, a college student added to his WeChat account. He was studying as a graduate student in the Department of Western History. He was a top student who won a full scholarship, not the second generation who came to dawdle.

My family background is average, so I still have a research assistant job, which is to work for a tutor. I get a salary of about 1500 knives a month, which can maintain my life in the United States.

Writing skills are of course not a problem.

Jonah's opening article was about 1000 words. Zhou Li'an didn't price it by [-] words, and the price was [-] dollars. He told him that it was a long-term work, and this was only part of the content.

The other party readily accepted, and later sent back the trial draft, which was successfully passed.

……

three days later.

Jonah is out of the hospital.

To Zhou Li'an's surprise, he completed another part of writing about 5 words during his hospitalization.

Lying on the hospital bed is also lying down, and Zhou Li'an pays his medical bills and helps him take care of his daughter, so he has to perform.

Genesis ends.

The Arrival of Equilibrium begins.

My Lord Balance traveled to the mainland and discovered an aboriginal tribe in North America. A tribe named the Modocs became the first people of Balance.

The short stories that happened during this period were all left in Zhou Li'an's outline. He has polished and filled them in, which is very dramatic.

In this regard, Jonah also expressed his inner confusion: "Zhou, what are you doing with this balance scripture?"

"The Lord of Equilibrium came to North America? Discovered the New World? Then what should I write next? Save the Indians?"

He has found the continuation direction of the story line from the outline.

A god came to North America to convert believers, and it certainly wouldn't stop there.

Fictional stories, overhead literature?
Is it possible that you still want to publish it?Luke Jonah didn't think there would be a market for this kind of thing.

Zhou Li'an said: "For a game with a different world background, if you want to develop the world view background, you can just write it."

"That world is governed by divine power, and the protagonist of the game will eventually rule the world, so modern disciplines need to be added to it at that time."

He described the ideas one by one, using game development as an excuse.

Luke Jonah has long been out of touch with society, knows nothing about the Internet, and understands half of what he heard, but he still nodded in response.

The boss gives money, and he works.

The main thing is...

Patricia, who hadn't seen her for three days, became a lot more cheerful. She was no longer taciturn, and sometimes she could speak complete sentences.

This is something that psychiatrists never did.

Not to mention his hard work as a father for 13 years, but he failed to get his daughter to open up.

After dinner, when Patricia went back to the room, Jonah asked, "How did you do it? Why did Patricia listen to you so much?"

Zhou Li'an was inconvenient to explain.

If he told Luke Jonah that he took Patricia to handjob... Jonah would probably be crazier than his daughter.

After all, she is a psychopath.

"I was a doctor before, and I know some trauma psychology. To put it simply, Patricia needs a vent. Anyway, don't worry about it, I won't hurt her. Well, she is quite cute."

……

[System time November 1401, 1]

Zhou Li'an only came at night recently, and after listening to Xue Nu's daily report to the tribe, he would continue to teach her Chinese.

The first part of the translation of the "Equilibrium Holy Canon" is marked with Chinese pinyin and used as a language textbook.

Xue Nu mastered it very quickly, and now she can speak simple Chinese with Zhou Li'an.

Of course, it's the kind of jumping words, with Modoc mixed in it.

But it's a good start.

Language learning has a process.

After Xuenv was proficient, she also began to let the tribal children recite and master it.

Zhou Li'an's plan is to make Xue Nu and more than [-] tribal children in the language class fully master reading and writing within one year.

They don't have to do anything else, just attend classes for eight hours a day.

The will of the gods cannot be disobeyed, and learning the language of the gods is considered an honor for children.

Therefore, Zhou Li'an also named these more than [-] children and taught them how to write their own names.

And after they studied during this period, they also shared the learning content with other children under the assignment of the elders of each tribe.

Including those elders who heard that our Lord had bestowed the "sacred scriptures" and began to learn pinyin spontaneously, wanting to comprehend the holy will of the gods.

With a passionate learning process, the efficiency is amazing.

Zhou Li'an estimates that in one year, many children will be able to communicate in Chinese in their daily lives.

And under the subtle influence, the tribal people will also master some daily expressions.

Another evening.

After several days of climbing the mountain, he led the knights who went out to explore and returned to meet Zhou Li'an.

"My lord is above!"

"We found many small tribal settlements in a mountain depression two days away in the south, each with 6 to 70 people."

"We captured a slave back. They don't wear clothes, they don't speak our language, and multiple settlements grow crops, and they can only hunt small animals for food."

Zhou Li'an was a little surprised.

After more than half a year, finally found a second tribe besides the Modocs?

The west is barren and cold, and sparsely populated.

There are not many aboriginal tribes that can be traced back to the California area, and the central and northern parts rely on water systems and woodlands to survive.

The south is extremely dry.

The testable Southwestern Indians were either in Mexico further below, or in the Colorado River valley a little to the east.

Like the ancients in all regions of the world, they relied on mountains to eat mountains, and relied on water to eat water, with large river basins as their gathering areas.

If it weren't for being able to hunt a large number of bison with iron tools for food, and horses and carriages as means of transportation, more than [-] people in Modoc moved south to California and could not survive at all.

Zhou Li'an ordered them to bring him up.

A thin man with sunken cheeks trembled and cried.

Climbing the mountain and the others couldn't understand, and they were already impatient, and wanted to shut him up with body language like 'slap in the face'.

But he didn't wait for him to make a move.

Everyone saw that my lord spoke a language similar to that of the man.

Ever since, the man stopped crying.

"Are you Mono or Paiute?"

These two tribes are the earliest natives of California and share the same language; Zhou Li'an can tell his identity from the language.

The man came all the way, and he had already seen the strength of the people of Balance, and guessed that the chief of this powerful tribe must be in front of him.

"The great leader of the most powerful tribe on the earth, you are as hot as the sun in the sky..."

"I am the Mono people, a small and weak tribe. If the great leader is willing, we are willing to be your slaves and dedicate everything to the Mono people."

straight to the point...

He voted.

(End of this chapter)