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Chapter 352 The perfect score composition for this year's college entrance examination is born!

Chapter 352 The perfect score composition for this year's college entrance examination is born!

After removing the broken tree, the road is free of obstacles and can be opened to two-lane traffic.

And after what happened just now, the car owners were very qualified and courteous to each other, which made the road quickly restored.

The students in the third class and the third class of senior high school also returned to the bus safely. Except for the red palms of the boys who participated in the tree removal, none of them were injured.

Everyone is still in the excitement of solving a big problem by themselves, especially the applause and praise of the adults around them, which makes them feel very proud.

Everyone's eyes could not help but focus on Qin Ke, Ning Qingyun was wiping his sweat with his own towel.

The eyes of the students couldn't hide the look of admiration. If Qin Ke hadn't proposed and personally took the lead in organizing this "rescue work", they would not have been able to enjoy the sweetness of this success.

"Brother Ke, you look so handsome in sweat!"

"That's right, Brother Ke is indeed Brother Ke, I will never forget the experience today, thank you Brother Ke!"

"Brother Ke, this is the best thing I've ever done, and I'm so proud to be a part of it!"

"My sister-in-law is amazing too! Braving the scorching sun to take the lead and go around to persuade the owner of the car!"

Even Fang Yongtang looked at his little boss with admiration. He didn't expect that what so many adults failed to do, he, a big kid who just graduated from high school, could actually do it!This power of action, this organizational power, is really unbearable.

The last trace of hesitation in Fang Yongtang's heart to work for "children" completely disappeared at this moment.

She never believed that such a child would not be able to achieve a great career in the future.Work well with the two small bosses, the future is bright!

The uncle driver also kept praising the students, saying that it was the first time he saw such outstanding students as you after all these years of driving.

This made the students in the bus feel more excited and proud.

If it is said that the one with the most complicated mood is probably Li Zhonghan.

Listening to the discussions around and seeing the undisguised admiration on their faces, Li Zhonghan, who participated in the whole process, felt a sense of pride and frustration at the same time.

He finally understood that even if he didn't mention the study, he couldn't win against Qin Ke, and he would never win.

But at the same time, he also understood why so many people like to call Qin Ke "Brother Ke" and are willing to follow his instructions.

Now, he also wants to call Qin Ke "Brother Ke".

……

On the same day, the news that Qin Ke organized to move the tree along the way spread through the provincial TV station, and the photos of Qin Ke sweating profusely to move the tree were widely reposted, which aroused countless praises on the Internet.

[Convinced, not only learning is great, but also such courage and decisive action to solve difficulties! 】

【Looking at this photo, I feel sorry for God Qin and admire God Qin. 】

[Amazing, I'm afraid I'll just curse and wait for the crane to come over when I encounter such a thing, and then waste most of the day in vain. 】

[It's really amazing, God Qin, our role model! 】

[Praise for God Qin! 】

[This video made my blood boil, these kids are amazing! 】

[Is this considered to be brave for righteousness?Can you apply for a collective reward for righteous deeds for this group of students? 】

A well-known free media person even wrote an article excitedly: "Achievements in learning are valuable, but being able to bend down and solve real-life problems for the public is truly commendable. I am the child of Qin Ke Like it from the heart of a child, and like it for all the students who enthusiastically participated in this tree-moving event!

……

When the Internet was full of praise, a Chinese teacher surnamed Wu, who was locked in the marking room, was sitting in the same marking room with a dozen colleagues, looking at the computer and marking the composition of the college entrance examination candidates.

Now the college entrance examination marking has already been paperless, and all the work of marking and scoring is done by computer.

Teacher Wu is one of the teachers in the composition evaluation team, who is responsible for grading the composition. Today, the grading process of the college entrance examination is very mature, especially the composition grading, basically has a complete set of normative standards.

"This is a narrative essay. The writing style is acceptable and the sentence structure is flexible, but the conception is not good enough."

Teacher Wu evaluated the composition after reading it in his heart, and then scored 48 points.

He rubbed his sore eyes and clicked on the composition of the next candidate.

"Huh? "Poverty leads to change, change leads to success"?"

The candidate's composition topic quoted ancient Chinese texts, which is not very eye-catching, but judging from the title alone, this candidate is one of the very few students who can accurately grasp the core gist of the composition topic of "Dream of Red Mansions".

Mr. Wu cheered up, and took a quick look at the lower volume. Yes, the handwriting is neat and correct, the paragraphs are well arranged, and there is no trace of alteration. The structure of the argumentative essay is used.

The first impression of this composition on Mr. Wu was very good.

He continued to read carefully.

As soon as he saw the "methodology" at the beginning and the argument drawn from the explanation of "poorness leads to change, change leads to success, and generality leads to long-term", Teacher Wu nodded secretly again, and it is stable. This student is at least stable in solving the problem.

Looking further, his eyes suddenly widened.

Li... Riemann conjecture?What the hell is this?

In the marking room, mobile phones and the Internet cannot be used. Thanks to Mr. Wu, who is a liberal arts student, he usually reads a lot of books. After thinking hard for a while, he vaguely remembered that this is a world-class mathematical conjecture.

This candidate actually said that he was studying the Riemann conjecture?Too overreaching, right?

What made Mr. Wu speechless the most was that the examinee boldly said that after thinking about it, he boldly ended the mistakes in the two directions and proposed the direction he thought was correct.

Teacher Wu shook his head. The theme of this composition is clearly written, and candidates are required to combine their own experience in study and life, so they should not use rote and false stories to fool people.

A high school student is actually talking about studying some world problems that the world's top mathematicians have not been able to solve. Isn't it ridiculous? Is it childish?

Of course, in the essays he reviewed before, some students were even more nonsense, actually writing about developing next-generation mechas, researching Mars probes, quantum chips, controllable nuclear fusion... in order to be different.

Moreover, they didn't use the style of small novels that could barely justify themselves, but like this one, they all used argumentative essays. Teacher Wu gave them all low marks without exception.

But... the description of this student always gives people a sense of righteousness and ignorance, which makes Teacher Wu, who doesn't know much about mathematics, feel guilty for some reason, and dare not give a low score.

He decided to read on.

The following is an example of why the Lime operating system can break out of the market. It is combined with the experience of the candidates themselves. This is no problem, and it is very innovative and bright.

Mr. Wu is also using Lime Operating System, and it is indeed very easy to use. The examinee's analysis is also very incisive and reasonable, which makes Mr. Wu nod repeatedly.I heard that next year's college entrance examination evaluation computers will all be installed with the Lime operating system.

Continue to read until the end, the full text is about 900 words.

The argument is precise, the evidence is sufficient, the material is rich, the structure is clear, the rhetorical techniques are used just right, and the sentences are infectious. The series of parallelism and rhetorical questions at the end made Mr. Wu a little excited. Moreover, he has a profound idea and novel insights, pointing out that innovation is science and technology. The only way for development and the progress of human civilization, especially scientific and technological researchers, must dare to use innovative methodology, step out of the comfort zone, dare to challenge authority, dare to make bold assumptions and carefully verify...

Such a pattern of mind is almost unique among high school students.

Teacher Wu couldn't help feeling a little embarrassed.

From the perspective of the article as a whole, this composition has full marks, especially the writing technique of the argumentative essay is very old and skillful, with rich and varied sentence patterns, it is really a rare good article.

He was not sure about the Riemann conjecture part alone.

Intuition told him that the student didn't seem to be bragging, and the example he wrote really demonstrated the importance of innovation.

Is it necessary for a candidate who can write such an excellent argumentative essay to falsify such a personal case?If he wants to find a better example, he should be able to find it at his fingertips, right?
Teacher Wu looked at the time, he had already spent enough time on this composition, and there was no longer any delay.

He took a deep breath and finally made a decision.

He entered the word "60" in the space for the score.

Soon after, the composition was randomly assigned to another teacher Chen.

Mr. Chen is an old-fashioned person, and he doesn't understand Riemann's conjecture at all. His intuition is that this student is talking nonsense. Although the overall level is good, he still only gave 50 points.

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For the composition of the college entrance examination, two teachers usually participate in the scoring, and the scores are automatically calculated by the computer. If the difference between the scores of the two reviewers is not more than 5 points, the average score of the two teachers will be taken as the score of the candidate's composition.

If the scores of the two teachers differ by more than 5 points, it will be automatically transferred to the team leader of the corresponding composition group of the two teachers, and the team leader will score.

If the score given by the team leader is closer to which teacher's score, then the sum of the team leader's and that teacher's scores will be divided by 2 as the candidate's composition score.

Because of the large difference in ratings, this article "Poorness leads to change, change leads to success" was naturally transferred to the computer of Yu Yizheng, the leader of the fifth composition group.

Yu Yizheng did not directly participate in the group's essay review work, but all the essays that came to him were essays with large differences in scores.

So Yu Yizheng is very cautious, and he has enough time to think slowly and give the most cautious score.

——He knows that whether his grading is fair or not will not only affect the future of the candidate for this composition, but even affect the whole body, which will affect the future of other candidates.After all, sometimes such a difference of one point will be related to whether a candidate can be admitted, and it is also related to whether other candidates will be squeezed out of the places of their favorite universities.

He clicked on the composition of "Change from Poverty, Change from Change", and read it carefully three times.

It is indeed a very good argumentative essay, excluding the part of Riemann's conjecture, it should be possible to give a full score.

He doesn't know much about Riemann's conjecture, but with his rich teaching experience, he can see that this student is not talking nonsense, and nonsense can't write such straightforward and esoteric details.

And dare to challenge world-class problems in high school, just this courage and courage are very closely related to the theme of this composition, and even have a kind of finishing touch.

What's more, he also has the same speculation as Mr. Wu. If he can write such a rigorous and excellent argumentative essay, why is there any need to falsify on such an innumerable evidence that can be drawn from?

Thinking of this, Yu Yizheng marked "60" on the score column without hesitation.

He also deliberately wrote in the final "Leader's Opinion": "Precise topic solving, prominent theme, novel arguments, grand pattern, rich arguments, rigorous structure, proficient rhetorical techniques, long and short sentence patterns, exquisite use of ancient poems, and excellent paragraphs. Impeccable. I rate it 60!"

Both he and Teacher Wu scored 60 points, which means that the candidate's composition will take the average score of the two, which is 60 points.

The first full-score essay for this year's college entrance examination was born!
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