I really want to pounce

Chapter 179 This point is very poisonous, you can add it

Ying is numb: "Recently, I'm researching the design of a new book, and I want to find some poisonous spots and avoid them, can you help me look?"

Happiness and Ping An: "Let's talk, I've been writing in Ping An for so many years, and I can tell what's poisonous and what's cool with my eyes closed."

Ying numb: "Then close your eyes, don't look at the screen, let me see if you can sense it telepathically."

Happy and safe: "???"

Ying is numb: "Ahem! Seriously, you think the map is often changed in the book. Is it a poison point?"

Happiness and Ping An: "Oh my god! This is a big poison spot! And the scariest thing about this poison spot is that if the reader doesn't say it's poisonous, then he suddenly stops reading, and you can only see the subscription drop. , but no one spoke. In the past, when the Internet was just emerging, everyone was used to the protagonist changing the map after a period of time in a place, and then regaining interpersonal relationships and new resources. But now it is outdated, and writing like this is Big poison!"

"The family property, people and relationships I have worked so hard to save before suddenly disappear later. The readers can't accept it, and they will run away at that time. For example, my "My Doomsday Simulator" was written in the later stage. I am invincible on Earth, and I am going to let the protagonist Shatter the Void go to other worlds to roam. Just had this sign, Broken went to another world and turned two chapters, and the subscription was dropped, and many people abandoned the book, so did I. I didn’t write any further, let the protagonist be invincible between heaven and earth and finish the book, otherwise they will all be booked out, so it’s better to accept it as soon as it’s good.”

"So, remember! Don't change the big map! Don't deliberately suppress the protagonist. He was awesome at first, but suddenly he went to the next world and became a dish again. After he became awesome, he went to the next world and became a dish again. Being forced to write like this is really poisonous, and current readers can’t accept it, so you must avoid this kind of writing in your new book.”

Pu Jie nodded, deeply agreeing.

The total subscription of his "Legend of the Stars" could have been higher, but a large number of people will be lost instantly when the map is changed.

The mortal world is promoted to the fairy world, and a group of them will go.

Immortal Realm ascended to God Realm, and another batch left.

The drop is huge!

Pu Jie feels that most of those who follow up are new readers attracted by Douyin advertisements and the TV series "Urban Son-in-law and Dragon King". Yes, there are no high requirements, the author can read whatever he writes, as long as he understands it anyway.

There is one thing to say, if there are not so many new readers, his "Legend of the Stars" score will definitely drop by more than half, and even ten thousand subscriptions will be a bit suspended, and repeated map changes will hurt readers.

After this question is finished, Pu Jie has a general idea. Since changing the map will affect readers' follow-up subscriptions, new books should be changed frequently!
You can always find a map you don't like, and end up running away with poison.

Poison point +1.

Ying is numb: "God of peace, when designing the plot of the new book, are there any other poisonous points that can be added and avoided?"

Happiness and peace: "That's too much! Let's talk about it for a few days, but you have written a novel with good grades. You are not a newcomer. Many poisonous points can be avoided by feeling. Let me just say Some... special poisonous points, that is, the poisonous points that you don’t think are very poisonous when you design, but will greatly affect the performance.”

Winning: "That's great! That's all I need!"

Happiness and peace: "I need it? Do I need to avoid it? Those who didn't know thought you were going to write a book full of poisonous points."

Winning is numb: "How could it be! Hahaha~haha~ha."

Happiness and peace: "What I'm going to talk about next is all the dry stuff I've summarized over the years in my vertical and horizontal web articles. Most people don't tell him. If it weren't for your innocent heart, the most important thing about a kind heart is a good vision! I won't tell you."

In Pu Jie's heart, [-] grass-mud horses passed by. You looked like a second-year-old at the beginning, so you look like a second-year-old, okay?
I once thought you were the crouching dragon I was looking for, but it turned out to be a fucking real dragon!

How unlucky!
Fortunately, now I have figured out the real identity of you, a stinky boss. After you finish telling me, I will directly do a wave of reverse operations, absolutely stable!

Pu Jie is good at summarizing, and also good at getting up from where he fell.

Knowing that the boss is right, if I do it the other way around, I will definitely hit the street.

This logic is impeccable, right?

Ying numb: "God of peace, tell me, I will remember."

Happiness and Peace: "When you design the plot, you must pay attention to the uniqueness of the protagonist's identity, that is, the identity and adventure of the protagonist in this world are unique, and no one else can copy it, such as my "My Doomsday" In "Simulator", the protagonist owns the only simulator that no one else has, which highlights the uniqueness of the protagonist."

Ying numb: "Eh? Is there still such a saying? I read some novels that also have groups crossing, groups opening game templates, and then competing, helping, fighting and so on."

Happiness and peace: "No, this is not the same as what I said. The two do not conflict. Let me give you an example. Suppose you have a system."

Pu Jie: (*゜ー゜*)

"I do not have!"

Happiness and peace: "If you have it."

"I really don't!"

Happiness and peace: "You just think you have a system."

"I'm not, I didn't, don't talk nonsense!"

Happy and safe: "."

Win numb: "."

The two were silent for a long time.

Happiness and peace: "Well, if I have a system, if I want to be the protagonist of a story, then this system must be unique, so that readers will have a stronger sense of substitution, and I will feel good if I have it without you. Although the readers don't say it, they subconsciously hope that the protagonist will be unique. I have some and others have them, which is nothing exciting. As for the kind of group travel and group gamification you mentioned, take a closer look. In fact, the protagonist has special features, such as group travel, the protagonist’s birthplace is in a special place, and he has received a certain inheritance, and then the inheritance is unique. This is the special feature of the protagonist. Therefore. No one has me Yes, only when people have their own essence can they reflect the specialness of the protagonist. When designing the plot, we must avoid the protagonist and other people on the same starting line."

Winning is numb: "Oh, I understand when you say that, but I have a question, do you really have a system?"

Happy and safe: "."

Win numb: "."

Happiness and peace: "Then I go?"

Ying numb: "Ahem. You continue to talk, I remember it, it helps me a lot!"

Pu Jie has already remembered.

It's the first time he's heard of the logic of the God of Peace, but...everyone uses it subconsciously, but they don't know the underlying logic.

In this way, Pu Jie has a new idea.

The situation of the protagonist at the beginning is the same as that of others, there is nothing special about it.

There are even many people who are just like him, others are earlier than him, and are more powerful than him.

In this way, readers will feel bored at first glance. Not only is the protagonist not special, but he is even an ordinary person.

This kind of persuasion effect has nothing to do with success!
Wonderful!

Poison point +2.

Happiness and peace: "Finally, I give you my exclusive secret guide, the perspective of writing a book. It must be closely focused on the protagonist, the newcomer. Even many old authors will make a mistake, thinking that their own strength can control the group portrait, and write the protagonist Several chapters have disappeared, this is absolutely not acceptable! Other people’s perspectives can be written, but don’t describe too much, mainly around the protagonist, and other people’s perspectives are also serving the protagonist, otherwise the sense of substitution will be gone. You originally controlled the character The ability is not high, and I put pen and ink on other people, and wrote 5 chapters to describe a villain's life experience and experience, and the readers just got dizzy, and then ran away."

"By the way, just to add to the previous article, if you are not a master, you must not touch the novels with double protagonists and multiple protagonists. In fact, the masters rarely write like this now. It is difficult to balance the relationship between the various characters, and it will affect your novel. The sense of substitution, of course, this is not absolute, it may be a masterpiece if it is written well, but most people including myself can’t write it well, let’s be realistic and just treat this as a poisonous point.”

Ying numb: "Hiss~~ Makes sense! I'm like this when I'm reading a book. Once the main character disappears, I'll turn back in a hurry. If I don't see the main character after turning ten chapters, I just don't read it."

Moreover, in the impression of Pu Jie in his previous life, novels with multiple protagonists. Only one "Xiao Yuer and Hua Wuque" became popular.

I haven't seen the others.

And it’s the same when watching TV dramas. In his previous life, “A Song of Ice and Fire” was so popular, but he couldn’t watch it because the world view was too big and the protagonist was not clear, which made him, an old reader of online articles, look very uncomfortable. Tried a few times and couldn't stand it.

The idea for the next book came immediately, and immediately arranged some messy supporting roles to grab the protagonist's role!
Each supporting role has its own story and plot.

Whether enemy or friendly, every character has a backstory.

If only one person appears on the stage, he will grab the leading role once.

Reader Empathy-N.

Poison point +3.

"Is there any more? The God of Peace will say a few more!"

(End of this chapter)