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Chapter 47 Single Chapter It's here again.

Chapter 47 Single Chapter It's here again.

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I was a little angry at first, but when I came back at night and just started typing, a brainless book review popped up. collapse.

If you don't like it, you don't have to read it, please don't hurt it, it makes sense, I will change it.Radish and cabbage, everyone has their own favorites, but the taste is difficult to adjust.

When I was in a hurry and angry, I replied to them: When I finish coding, I will issue a single chapter in the middle of the night.

I kept typing while I was nervous, and it was only 10 minutes to twelve o'clock before I finished typing. I kept thinking about the plot, and my anger because of the book review disappeared. If I hadn't said the words, this single chapter would not have appeared. It's past twelve o'clock, and I only slept for six hours yesterday.

Maybe it's a newcomer. Many book reviews are replying, but I find that I really can't explain it. Many ideas seem to me to be strange and unimaginable.There are also pure sprays for spraying.

First answer the question about the book friend group that a book friend asked. There will be a book friend group, but it is likely that it will be established after the end of the book or later. Come write better.

I don't think my writing is so good, there are many shortcomings, even many book friends' writing ability is higher than mine, and I have read the corrections of many book friends seriously.

Every novel must have its own characteristics and positioning in order to be different. My book is to write a story about a modern ordinary person traveling through the world of cultivating immortals. The biggest difference is that I strive to be reasonable.

I know that there are many people who write cool articles and routines, and they earn more. I don’t think my ideas will be worse than others, but there are too many people who write, and my writing is poor, so I can only go my own way.

Just like other people's world of cultivating immortals, high-level monks can't wait to practice for thousands of years, but they die every day like dumplings. , all kinds of fighting methods and killings every day, except for the protagonist, the death rate is almost full, is this cultivating immortals?Not PUBG?

I won't talk about the brainless spray, but I will talk about the most criticized issues in book reviews.

The first is that the protagonist should pay attention to protecting the skin. What I want to express is that there is a desire to cultivate immortals, but there is no hope in the small mountain village. There is no way at all. The seemingly methods and practices are ridiculous, but people are in despair Hope is needed, even if it is pitiful and ridiculous.

From a realistic point of view, which modern person would like to be tanned as a black man when he was a child?This is a normal ordinary heart.

Another thing that was criticized was the protagonist's laziness. I just didn't have such a detailed writing process. If I want to start writing this, I guess this book will be scrapped.

Writing too much may be long-winded, and writing too much may be all wrong.

Imagine that a modern person suddenly turns back to an ancient child, the language and characters have changed, not to mention traveling through those novels, in your case, should you dream first or panic first.

Five or six years old, you can't eat enough, or you have been hungry since birth, and you start working. From the perspective of a modern person, you are just a young child. How many people can start working as cattle and horses? ?His disposition is almost like that of a modern person, even suicide is possible.

But under this kind of productivity, where starvation is commonplace, bad children will directly reduce their rations and continue to starve you. This is a vicious circle.

Are you giving in?Still retain a stubbornness.

Some people directly commented that the protagonist deserves to be sold. Didn’t you see that the protagonist I wrote worked hard and shared the wild game with the family?What's the situation? It's a situation where the feet are weak every day because of hunger. He still cares about family affection.

The main reason is that the protagonist is not an aborigine, but has memories of his previous life. Comparing the two lives, it would be nice not to despair.

He even has to be careful when talking at the dinner table, how difficult is it to live?

Couldn't it be seen that the purpose of the protagonist's parents to sell him is to marry his elder brother?It has nothing to do with whether he is lazy or not.

There is not enough food. It is understandable for a ten-year-old to not have enough to eat. Can a five- or six-year-old eat more?It's not true that children are ignorant.

If the protagonist was full when he was five or six years old, how could he watch his parents not getting enough to eat and not working?People's hearts are all fleshy, but this is not the case.

Whether or not to get a tan is a nice excuse, even in times of difficulty, there is still hope.I don't want to write so depressingly.Don't say anything about how it is possible to have such parents, have you ever heard of Yiziershi?Poverty is the original sin, don't you understand?Otherwise, there are so many sold.

There are thousands of good parents, but there are also a few assholes.

Even in the world of books, it is not impossible for everyone to be like this, only a very small number, but the protagonist has caught up, and it is more of the helplessness of survival, the forced wisdom of survival, so in the end it will be said that understanding is understanding, but never forgive.

The novel is a joy to read, and I write it down in one stroke, so as not to affect my mood, I can stand on several floors and read it on several floors, and I have written it all, leaving no room for imagination.It's not that I want to write tragic, but I want to be as close to reality as possible, so that I can feel better when I write it refreshingly.

The third point is the chapter about the protagonist blocking the road and robbing, all kinds of sayings are courting death.Didn’t everyone see that the hidden meaning is courting death, starving to death immediately, even if you pretend to be unconscious, you don’t want to lose the dignity of the last traverser, thinking it’s a robbery, but in fact it’s death anyway, so leave the strengthening point at the end The iron plate, this is a life-saving grace.

Some people say that the guard killing the protagonist is like killing a chicken, ten taels of silver is a lot, and the guard may come back and kill secretly.Excuse me, what about human nature?First of all, if they can protect women and children on the road, the temperament of the guards cannot be bad. Secondly, if several guards sneak back to one, can the others not know?If they are all this kind of people, it is impossible to give the protagonist something, and on the main road, the protagonist will stay where he is after getting money and food?Doesn't the mallet do the same?

The world is different, so don’t bring it in casually, because the systems are different, it’s impossible to bring an [-]-word narration explanation in one sentence, and it’s impossible to use ten or twenty chapters alone to introduce customs and customs, only a little bit in the book Come out naturally.

Some people also said that too few immortals and spirit stones are unreasonable. I forgot what they said exactly. I just searched and couldn't find it. I just want to say that I didn't see a chapter title. Is this world abnormal?The foreshadowing left behind will be uncovered later.

There are also a few who say that the protagonist doesn't seem to have grown up, what a ten-year-old thin child can do in a world that almost pays attention to the jungle!
If there are some, they are deliberately teased to enliven the atmosphere, or they are too dull. It is so easy for a mortal to cultivate immortality.

In a blink of an eye, it will be 01:30 in the morning, and the single chapter of this explanation will not be published in the future. After all, no one can write a work that satisfies everyone, and it will also affect everyone's reading experience.

It's just that, reading other people's book reviews, most of them are peaceful. Half of my comments are questioning or spit out, and I am a little unwilling.Is it true that only writing the settings and plots written by others is the light of the righteous way?The important thing to be a human being is to keep growing, and so is being a bookworm.

(End of this chapter)

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