Tokyo host

Chapter 318 The Teacher's Monologue (45)

"No."

After Takahashi Tetsuya finished reading the script written by Makoto Futaba, he slowly put down the phone and shook his head.

"Eh?"

Makoto Futaba seemed surprised to see Takahashi Tetsu rejecting him so flatly. After all, he also chased so many, and there were at least dozens of wives in the dust-proof cabinet—it should be the same when it comes to encounters and exchanges between beautiful girls. It's not that bad, it was rejected by Takahashi Tetsuya.

"call."

Takahashi Tetsu also put down the phone, and then showed a complicated look: "I said, Ah Cheng, if you really want to make a popular galgame, at least at the current level, it will definitely not work."

"The reason?"

"Well, it seems that you don't understand." Takahashi Tetsu also bent down, and then pointed to one of the paragraphs on the phone.

【·The protagonist is on the way to school, at the entrance of the wagashi shop on Meilin Street, and bumps into the heroine who is rushing to school with bread in her mouth】

[Protagonist: Are you okay? (reaches out and pulls up the heroine)]

[Heroine: Ah...it's okay. (The heroine is shy)]

"What's wrong with this paragraph?" Futaba Makoto scratched his head.

"No problem is the big problem." Tetsuya Takahashi said, "What age is it, the girl with bread in her mouth, and - I can guess the follow-up of your plot, is it because of this incident, Let the hero and heroine have an intersection, and finally the heroine likes the protagonist?"

Futaba Makoto gave a thumbs up: "How do you know?"

"You wrote such an old-fashioned plot, can I not guess it?!" Tetsuya Takahashi said, "This type of drama, I have watched dozens of similar dramas, let alone galgame."

Futaba Makoto touched his chin: "Is it so exaggerated?"

"Not at all! It must be rewritten."

"Eh?! I wrote it all night." Futaba Makoto said with a pitiful expression, "You are too strict."

"You might as well write that the heroine bumped into the hero on purpose. In fact, she is a bitch gold digger, and the hero is a rich second generation. This is her trick to deliberately create an encounter." Tetsuya Takahashi said.

Futaba Makoto thought about it carefully, it seems that writing like this is not bad, but isn't the heroine not likable?

"In this case, will the player hate the heroine?"

"It's fine to clean up later." Tetsuya Takahashi said, "In short, a script like the one you just had decades ago is absolutely not acceptable."

"Ok."

"Also." Takahashi Tetsuya swiped his phone again, and then showed Futaba Makoto, "Why do you always insert Meilin Street from time to time in every conversation?"

[Meilin Street is really hot today, it seems like I went to the corner store to buy an ice cream shop. 】

【Uiyichan, let's go home together after school, let's go to Meilin Street to do some shopping. 】

【Ah, I'm hungry, shall we go to the ramen shop on Meilin Street? 】

[By the way, Merlin Street recently...]

Takahashi Tetsu also complained vigorously: "What kind of strange protagonist is this three-sentence inseparable from Meilin Street?!"

Makoto Futaba laughed, scratched his cheek with his fingers and looked away.

It is a little bit more inserted...

"If you do this, it will make players feel disgusted. It is okay to insert, but the number must be controlled." Takahashi said.

Since the senior galgame player beside him said so, Makoto Futaba could only nod his head.

However, although writing a script is much easier than writing a novel, he still doesn't have any good plots in his head.

Well……

"Can't think of a plot?" Tetsuya Takahashi asked.

"Indeed, it may also be because I stayed up late, and the speed of my brain slowed down." Makoto Futaba said.

"Since there are no good ideas, why not find some inspiration from around?"

"Inspiration?" Futaba Makoto thought about what kind of inspiration he could have around him.

After all, in reality, it is impossible for boys to be surrounded by beautiful girls all day long, and beautiful girls themselves are rare animals, why should they hang around a boy?

It's not that the boy is extremely handsome.

Futaba Makoto sighed.

In the next second, his expression paused slightly.

Why does a person surrounded by beautiful girls all day sound inexplicably familiar?

"Speaking of which, it seems that there are many beautiful girls around me, although it is because of being the landlord." Makoto Futaba pondered, and a thought slowly emerged from his mind: "Landlord... tenant, beautiful girl girl."

Suddenly, Makoto Futaba slammed his fist on the palm of his hand: "Yes, good script!"

"You scared me." Seeing Makoto Futaba's sudden excitement, Tetsuya Takahashi asked, "What good script?"

"You said, what about the theme that the protagonist is a landlord and the tenants are all beautiful girls?" Makoto Futaba asked.

"Well, I don't think I've seen anything like it." Takahashi Tetsu also tilted his head thinking, "H games seem to have some of this type, but the core is not about landlords and tenants, it's just easy to get started."

"Then it's decided like this." Makoto Futaba seemed to be full of inspiration at this time,
"The tenants are all problem girls. The protagonist's task is to solve the problem girl's heart knot, and finally win the other party's heart."

"Anthracene?" Takahashi Tetsu also smiled, "Is it a problem girl, very galgame style."

"Then I'll look forward to it."

"Leave it to me."

……

……

Mandarin class.

"Come on, turn to page 87..."

The chalk and the blackboard made a crisp clattering sound. The teacher was on the stage explaining the content of the class. Ten minutes later, the teacher’s gaze suddenly looked into the distance, and he was a little dazed—Student Futaba, who had been sleeping in class, Today it is rare to sit upright and write something with a pen.

And Gong Bai, who was beside him, also sat quietly without sleeping, taking notes with a pen.

The teacher is very aware of their grades, and also knows that they study hard every night, which makes them prone to sleepiness during the day... Sometimes, the teacher wonders whether it is because of his poor lecture level that these two top students choose to study by themselves, although His heart would be a little bit shocked, but those two children were first or second in their degree after all, so he didn't say much.

"It seems that my teaching level has improved, which made them start to suspend classes seriously." The teacher secretly said in his heart, a kind of spontaneous pride emerged from his heart.

His waist couldn't help straightening up a bit, and his voice suddenly became louder——

"Okay, students..."

The students in the audience looked at each other in dismay, why the teacher suddenly became energetic in the middle of the lecture.

Is it to feel it?
"Study hard, Futaba and Miyabai, the teacher will work harder for you." After writing various contents on the blackboard, the teacher looked back to Futaba Makoto, nodding secretly in his heart.

"If you are admitted to a famous university in the future, you must remember the Mandarin teacher who paid for you."

……

At this time, Gong Baiyu, who was sitting next to Futaba Makoto, pushed his notebook over, and Futaba Makoto, who was concentrating on writing the script, glanced at it and found that the notebook was full of breast shapes of various sizes.

Shuangye Cheng: "..."

[(˙˙)Which one do you like? ] The girl next to her blinked her beautiful eyes.

"You kind." Makoto Futaba said.

Gong Baiyu's beautiful eyes were bent into crescent moons.

(End of this chapter)